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Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-06-25 03:01 AM

Heart Thaw

Like rays of the sun
melt away the winter
the light of your beauty
warms the core of my soul
and away runs the pain
in rivulets it flows
transformed from the mantle
that held frozen my heart...

Nameless One

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brian madden
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1 posted 2000-06-25 07:45 AM

Nameless, awonderful poem. beautifully written.

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

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2 posted 2000-06-29 04:20 PM

I really like this poem it needs to be on the first page,


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3 posted 2000-06-29 09:41 PM

So much said in so few words, well written, my friend.  I relate very much to this.  It has my vote  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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4 posted 2000-06-29 10:01 PM

Short n sweet yet very succinct. I really like this. Well done   "voted"

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5 posted 2000-06-29 10:33 PM

Nameless One~ SIGH~ this is very touching.   **VOTE**   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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Blue Heaven
6 posted 2000-06-29 10:39 PM

Wonderful similes. Deserves my vote.

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-07-15 12:24 PM

yes, this is exactly how it is.  I like...
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8 posted 2000-07-15 12:35 PM

Very nice writing.  Short and sweet.


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
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