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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Heart Thaw Like rays of the sun melt away the winter the light of your beauty warms the core of my soul and away runs the pain in rivulets it flows transformed from the mantle that held frozen my heart... Nameless One |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Nameless, awonderful poem. beautifully written. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
I really like this poem it needs to be on the first page, BUMP Cerenity |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So much said in so few words, well written, my friend. I relate very much to this. It has my vote Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Short n sweet yet very succinct. I really like this. Well done "voted" J. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nameless One~ SIGH~ this is very touching. **VOTE** -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful similes. Deserves my vote. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes, this is exactly how it is. I like... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice writing. Short and sweet. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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