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Like A Breeze Blowing Backwards |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Like a breeze blowing backwards through this life of mine I journeyed back last night to a special place and time Like a breeze blowing backwards I heard you say my name, the sound went to my ears yet touched my heart the same Like a breeze blowing backwards through my memory I saw your face- I felt your hands reaching out for me Like a breeze blowing backwards the songs danced on air whimiscal and feather light my soul I did bare Like a breeze blowing backwards Time's ocean has been part, so that I may wonder through the memories in my heart -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA - I remember this as being one of the first poems I read when I became a member, loved it then, still love it now. Bonnie |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
SEA, I like this poem a lot!!!! "Like a Breeze blowing backwards"!! So original!! Bridgette  "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like the way the line is repeated. Enjoyed this one!  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
SEA- "Like a breeze blowing backwards" I just like this line. Very creative. I loved the sense of the whole poem too. Joy |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very whimsical and flowing SEA ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I like the whole concept of a backwards breeze being related to memories....very creative indeed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sea-girl this is PERFECT i dont think I ve seen this one by you before perfect choice to reflect your work jm |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very beautifully expressed, a most enjoyable read... backwards breeze evokes, brings memories forward... nice theme... regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
finding all of my favorites today...what a feast! |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
SEA, the title had me intrigues, the poem had me captivated! Well done Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Great piece here Sea...I loved it. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea, I LOVE this one for sure.... Cerenity |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ A beauty from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
What a lovely poem..i could visualise each verse as the poem progressed! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sea, this is excellent! A breeze blowing backward....what a terrific thought. This BETTER get in that book! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Gentle, sad and beautiful. Mike |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wanted to tell everyone thank you for the great replys. This is one of my personal favorites.....  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
mmmmm nice! I liked the longing feel this piece has... ~Heather |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Heather~ thanks, it felt that way when writing it, it came from a dream. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
SEA, this is so gorgeous....I am totally swept away by your words....(click )*Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... see you around... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, this is beautiful!! *click* |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
"like a breeze blowing backwards'.. yes how we hope our lives can go backwards.. True love will never die... Good poem - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Liked it |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I really liked the repetition of the first line in each stanza! It makes this poem flow nicely! Debbie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So lovely and tender SEA Thanks for sharing such a beautiful and delightful poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Sea, Like a breeze blowing backwards... this had me from the start, but then what followed was a sheer delight to read. I have voted for this... I liked it very much. Linda M. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very well penned. Flawless verses I love it Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hauntingly lovely, got my vote! Corinne |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SEA..interesting concept..! very nice dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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