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since 2000-07-03Posts 41
miami, fl, u.s
what should i do when i miss something so bad i can't seem to let go of it?
when i miss it so bad that i'm scared to let it go because i can't live without missing it....
but i know it's bad.......
is not a good feeling
it has taken over my spirit,
influencing my whole being,
left me unable to think,
or even feel........
and all the while my life seems to be falling apart......
then the others......
stuck in this place.....
but eventhough this bad feeling burns me from the inside out,
it keeps me holding up, awake,
with what a smal desire i have to live...
so now i just don't know what to do.......
i hope you guys like it...
thanks for reading,
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since 2000-05-10Posts 123
Welcome to the family!! I think this' a great first poem. Keep up the writing.
Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible
since 2000-06-26Posts 3168
Nice poem, I enjoy shaped poetry.
Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".
since 1999-06-19Posts 2462
since 2000-07-26Posts 29
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
Yes, I did like it very much....I agree with the others....I like the shape of it.
since 2000-05-14Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
Great start.......very good poem...quite the shape...very interesting!
since 2000-02-02Posts 664
well written poem...
If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
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