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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
what should i do when i miss something so bad i can't seem to let go of it? when i miss it so bad that i'm scared to let it go because i can't live without missing it.... but i know it's bad....... is not a good feeling it has taken over my spirit, influencing my whole being, left me unable to think, concentrate, or even feel........ and all the while my life seems to be falling apart...... .....slowly.....one thing, then the others...... i'm helpless, stuck in this place..... but eventhough this bad feeling burns me from the inside out, it keeps me holding up, awake, with what a smal desire i have to live... so now i just don't know what to do....... *&~@*^%#~~*++*^#@~~+*^% i hope you guys like it... thanks for reading, love.... buttercup |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Buttercup, Welcome to the family!!  I think this' a great first poem. Keep up the writing.Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Nice poem, I enjoy shaped poetry. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely expressed. |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
Yes, I did like it very much....I agree with the others....I like the shape of it. Stephanie Lafleur |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great start.......very good poem...quite the shape...very interesting! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... nice work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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