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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Oh how sweet, Your tiny little eyes, Looking back at me, I get happy just watching you breathe, Seeing you hold up your fingers, Counting to three, What a joy, A blessing I have been given, A life so precious, You are my life I am living, To hold you close in my arms at night, To kiss your soft little cheek, As I turn out the light, You are my happiness, My smile, my life, Joy you bring, To my heart to sing, Sweet lullabies, To you everynight, Trucks and cars, Scratches and scars, Crayons broken into, little flowers picked, To say mom,"I Love You" Oh how I cheerish you, I love you my sweetie, Time goes by so fast, I want ours to last, Every minute, evey day I savor, Watching you eat your favorite Icecream flavor, Playing with toys in the sand, Holding on to my hand, Kissing boo-boos, reading nighttime stories, Making cookies, Camping out, You are what life is about, Playing games, making crafts, Playing tickle to see you laugh, Oh How I enjoy the little things with you, The little things about you, Every moment measured, Every moment treasured, I am so happy with you, And one day, I will turn around, As tears fall to the ground, My little man, will no longer be two, A handsome man, full of love and truth, I will always look into those tiny eyes, and see the little man of your youth, You will always be mommies little man.... [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
RH, Having two "little men" of my own I know very well the sentiments behind this piece. You have done a terrific job of showing us how precious they are when they're two  All my love, Jeffrey |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes, Jeff they grow-up too fast, my time on passions is limited, because children should come first, they need all the love and attention they can get, never do they stop needing it, nor will I stop giving it! Thank you! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh sweetie this is absolutely adorable, you have really made this a packed full of imagery poem. I can see you both now what magic you have portrayed in this piece. I could see him looking at his fingers as he counted and then his eyes looking up at you for assurance...they are so beautiful children and they deserve our love and guidence always sweet poem Romatic Heart Luv Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
RM, noone has expressed the joy of being a Mother better than you did in this poem. The love you have for your "little man" just flows from this poem. He's a lucky little guy to have an incredible Mother like you! Loved your poem! No book would be complete without a beautiful poem such as yours on the very first page. ~~wonderful writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Tracie your so sweet, Thank you! Danny, Your words touch me, Thank you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
One of my favorites of yours! This is precious! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ So enjoyed this little joy from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Denise, it is my favorite of all! Thanks Marge!He is the joy of my life!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
They are treasures, these little boys that grow up to be little boys dressed as men!! LOL Lovely poem, done lovingly.  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks miss Devine, lol!!! I agree! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, you wrote "crayons broken into, little flowers picked." I read "Crayons broken into little flowers picked." And I thought -- holy ****, now THAT'S a poetic line. So even though you didn't really write that, who cares? Here's a vote. Mike |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful poetry. Enjoyed very much. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Romantic Heart~ I passed by this poem a couple times knowing it would make me cry, and waiting until I thought I could read it without crying.....guess what...I cried...... My son is almost 8 and I "remember when" he was only 2. It goes much too fast....*****VOTE***** -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bsquirrel..yes, I don't spell too good, but my heart is in it!lol! Thanks for your vote! Mike thank you, sonnet king! Oh Sea, I'm sorry you cried, I know, time slips by us too fast! thanks for your vote! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ah Yes... how I do understand those feelings... My daughters are fond of saying that "We'll always be your little babies." How true... how true. I'm sure your son will charish your words in his adulthood. Best of luck and love with your little man. Peace! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What an absolutely precious poem, these moments do fly so quickly, but you've captured some here that will last a lifetime. This is so sweet Liz |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Andrew..Best wishes and love with those daughters,enjoy every minute..I am sure your daughter would love your poem on her wedding day!!Thanks! Elizabeth...Thank you, your reply was sweet too! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
OK, moderators, slap my hand if you must for voting twice for one poem, but one as beautiful as this deserves a second read. Kids are my weakness, what can I say??? A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
A poem as touching as this deserves all the votes that care to be rendered. I can honestly say that my life would not be the same without my angels, ALMOST made me want another one.  Beautiful words of love here. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I do NOT want my sons to grow up! (selfish ain't I??) Lovely poem girl ~H |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Oops! I was so overwhelmed the first time through, I forgot to check the box. All better now and once again...loved this work. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for your votes! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This one cannot get lost in the shuffle...I loved this...poetry about children is such a treasure!! You sound like a wonderful Mommy with a wonderful little Man!!! Very, very sweet!! I loved it!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi A Romantic Heart, got to love those kids at that age. Enjoy, enjoy, because he is only going to be two once. Love this down to earth expression of a mother's love. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very lovely poem. I too love poems about children..........I also agree about him being your life, my kids are my life. They sometimes say "I'm not a baby anymore mommy" so I had to explain that to me........they will always be. Then they just smile and say "ok, mommy if you say so" When I wrote the one for my kids (Always there), my oldest daughter(11 yrs) cried and said"I didn't know you loved us that much" cute huh? LOL you wrote a wonderful poem....... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
How well I remember them at two. Now that they are grown, I find I love them even more. It only gets better. Lovely poem and it has my vote!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, I remember this the first time I read it. You trully are blessed, and so is he to have such a loving mom. Parker..... the vote is in. |
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