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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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I'm Here... I'm here... Cold, wet, and sad. You're here... In your Sunday best looking radiant and peaceful. Why am I here?... It's way to soon we never hugged good-bye. Why are you here?... You had so much more to do so much love to share. How do I carry on here?... Without your boosts of confidence without your cheerful greeting everyday without my cherished friend to walk beside me. Can you visit here?... With angel wings to hover next to me with a soft touch to let me know your here with guidance when I'm feeling lost. I'm here... Cold, wet tears occupying my face. The final good-bye, the completion of your circle of life. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LD~ this made my eyes sting and fill....it's wonderful!  -SEA |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh Wow Dreamer!! My face is wet!! What a wonderful poem!!!! This one is a keeper!! Been awhile since I've read your wonderful poetry!! Well Done!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh girl...it took me awhile to figure out where this was going, but oh boy....how beautiful, and what a lovely poem to submit, as a sort of a tribute. Very lovely. I like your new pic btw! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I like! One lil typo....at the top...YOUR should be You're...hope ya don't mind...I used ta be a proofreader by trade kudos H |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sadly beautiful tribute. well expressed emotions... like the last lines soft gentle impact good choice to reflect your work take care, jm |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yes, your very best. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching and beautifully done, Gloria! Denise |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
*hugs* Very moving, very wonderful. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
LD - Such a sadly beautiful tribute. Certainly pulled on my heartstrings. Bonnie |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
great poem losty yuh |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank you all for reading and replying, I wrote this after John F. Kennedy Jr. died, and I was thinking of a really good friend and how I would feel if she died. X-Angel: Thank you for catching my typo, I appreciate. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
the circle of life I believe in it... this is a wonderful poem... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
AVANTI: Thank You very much for your reply, I appreciate. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LD~ Beautiful writings, so tender and touching HUGS Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
LD, A sad /sweet story of saying goodbye to one so dear. Well done! Dennis :^) |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
one of my favorites of yours, gloria... i voted for this one long before anybody heard voices.... good job, m'friend "Outside of a dog, a book is a man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read." - Groucho Marx |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love this. Mike |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such sweet and tender sentiments Lost Dreamer ... beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very touching. I loved it. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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