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Poetry's Beauty Tanka |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~*Poetry's Beauty Tanka*~ 5-7-5-7-7 From the heart to pen such beauty in expression words dance on paper! Poetry delights the senses, setting the weary soul free By Melissa P. Monette aka- Melissa Honeybee |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Melissa,, That is a very nice poem. I really love it. Too bad there are 8 syllables in the 4th line however.(not that I am picking.. I think it is great) jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice Tanka~~ and i like all the syllables! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've described it perfectly! Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Voted and i think "weary" just about describes it regards |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! Found this gem hiding here! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Melissa, hey I loved this, beautiful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is beautiful Melissa......very good work! |
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