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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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"LOST" Lost in a haze of complete confusion I feel this battle of my heart & mind I'm losing Never understanding how I ended up here Not wanting to hurt you & filled with such fear I continue to stay forever lost in my twisted reality My heart, mind, & soul feel like a tragic fatality I choose not to see things that are painfully obvious to others Now my heart feels so heavy with lies we both try to cover I feel so alone & so very lost in my world I scream for help~yet I'm never heard Losing faith, losing hope, losing heart, losing soul In general just being forever lost Looking around my world I start to realize my loss And seeing what it has cost How did I get here? How did this happen to me? All I wanted was to be loved for free A no regret kind of love One that fits me like a glove How did something so right turn into something that carries so much pain & sadness into our lives? Here I sit..lost forever in my own haze of complete confusion... HLB '99 |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So sad...nice poem!! Some of the best poetry is when it relates to soo many lives!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very sad...very touching...very well written..nice job here ... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
yeah...I know whatcha mean... *sigh* good job! ~Heather |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Very sad, heartfelt piece All my love, Jeffrey |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Much emotion in this poem 'sigh' wonderful work here. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
aww...c'mon you people have better give this one another chance..... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
How did this one go unseen by me?? It is a very heartfelt and all to close story. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Chris-Hey my little cheering section..hehe. I thank you SOOOOO very much for your sweet, sweet words. I enjoy having my own cheering section! I'm certainly fond of being yours. ;o) Prometheus-Thank you! I appreciate your words of kindness and taking the time to read. You guys are great! love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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