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since 2000-02-04
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New York, USA

0 posted 2000-06-27 10:21 PM

How precious the little angel
That waits outside for me,
Downy, delicate feathers,
On wings that are so wee.
Chestnut curls surround her face,
Her eyes an emerald green,
Dimples in her chubby cheeks,
A rosebud mouth, serene.
Her peaches and cream complexion,
Matches her little robe,
In her hands she's holding,
A mystical looking globe.
She beckons me to come closer,
And take a little peek,
What I saw in that mirrored ball,
Made my legs feel weak.
I saw a scene with Our Father,
Sitting in a heavenly glade,
Surrounded by little children,
Explaining the beauty He's made.
First a lop-eared bunny,
Then a pure white baby dove,
A mother deer with two little fawns,
All created with His love.
He pointed out the sunshine,
The flowers, grass and trees,
He even told them all the whys,
Of butterflies and bees.
I heard the daintiest giggle,
And saw the cherub's smile,
As she revealed the secrets,
That make this life worthwhile.

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 06-28-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-06-27 10:24 PM

This is beautiful, gave me warm fuzzies  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-06-27 10:45 PM

where's my teddy bear??
very nice

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Marge Tindal
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-06-27 10:45 PM

This is sooooooo beautiful !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~

Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
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New York, USA
4 posted 2000-06-28 07:50 AM

Dark Angel, Prometheus and Marge, Thank you for your kind replies.  Bonnie
X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
5 posted 2000-06-28 06:26 PM

oh this was serene.

I think you have a little gem here that it being missed....I'll send the URL icq to a few buddies

Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 2000-06-28 06:30 PM

Very nice, indeed... I like it..

since 2000-06-28
Posts 388
Missing Since 1999
7 posted 2000-06-28 07:34 PM

I was having such a lousy day (I even cried at work! *sniff*) But that just made me feel a little better... thanks.  

"I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel."
~Touch and Go

Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
8 posted 2000-06-28 09:58 PM

X Angel - Thanks, I needed that, so glad you liked it.
Nan - Awwww, she's the cutest little angel, thanks.
AniKay - Thanks so much, hope your day got better!!!  

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since 2000-06-22
Posts 33

9 posted 2000-06-29 05:15 PM

I love your angel poems. I can picture it so vividly in my mind.

my vote is for this one toooooo.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
10 posted 2000-06-29 09:14 PM

Lovely! Absolutely lovely!
You are a very talented writer... vote's in here.

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since 2000-05-28
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Plantation, Florida
11 posted 2000-06-30 09:55 AM

Beautifully written, you have my vote!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

12 posted 2000-07-01 09:09 PM

love the title...
lovely writing and thoughts

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
13 posted 2000-07-01 09:14 PM

beautiful poem.  like the different spin on life and why we are here.  nice read.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

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since 1999-08-22
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14 posted 2000-07-01 11:12 PM

This is precious, Bonnie! I love it!  


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since 1999-06-19
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15 posted 2000-07-02 11:49 AM

wonderfully done.  I enjoyed your poem very much.
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Floating gently on a cloud....
16 posted 2000-07-02 11:54 AM

Bonnie, I love this!!

Love and hugs,

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

L Tiuch
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151
17 posted 2000-07-25 05:10 PM

Bonnie...this is beautiful.  I had to take a second read however, because in the beginning when you were describing...emerald green eyes, dimples in pudgy cheeks, wearing a robe...I thought you were describing me on my way for coffee.  The imagery is wonderful.  Linda
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18 posted 2000-07-25 08:30 PM

WOW this created the most wondrous images in my mind    thanks

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
19 posted 2000-07-25 10:03 PM

This is angelically special..very good
Member Elite
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New York, USA
20 posted 2000-07-25 11:39 PM

Linda,lol, Tracie & Ethome, Thank you all so much for reading and for your kind replies.  They are so appreciated.  Bonnie
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
21 posted 2000-07-26 12:09 PM

Bonnie this was stunning, gave me goose bumps. You got my vote girly.

Heather Miller
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
22 posted 2000-07-27 01:37 PM

Very sweetly written
I really enjoyed it.
I also can picture our heavenly Father with all the children, such a beautiful site.

With God all things are possible.

Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49
Tucson, AZ
23 posted 2000-07-27 01:43 PM

Wonderful poem! Very visual and heart warming.
Definately a keeper!!!

Life is not a spectator Sport!
Dance like no one's watching.
Love like it's never going to hurt.

Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
24 posted 2000-07-27 11:30 PM

Juls, Heather & Michelle - Thank you all, so glad you enjoyed it.  Bonnie
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