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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
How precious the little angel That waits outside for me, Downy, delicate feathers, On wings that are so wee. Chestnut curls surround her face, Her eyes an emerald green, Dimples in her chubby cheeks, A rosebud mouth, serene. Her peaches and cream complexion, Matches her little robe, In her hands she's holding, A mystical looking globe. She beckons me to come closer, And take a little peek, What I saw in that mirrored ball, Made my legs feel weak. I saw a scene with Our Father, Sitting in a heavenly glade, Surrounded by little children, Explaining the beauty He's made. First a lop-eared bunny, Then a pure white baby dove, A mother deer with two little fawns, All created with His love. He pointed out the sunshine, The flowers, grass and trees, He even told them all the whys, Of butterflies and bees. I heard the daintiest giggle, And saw the cherub's smile, As she revealed the secrets, That make this life worthwhile. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful, gave me warm fuzzies voted Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
where's my teddy bear?? very nice jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ This is sooooooo beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Dark Angel, Prometheus and Marge, Thank you for your kind replies. Bonnie |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* oh this was serene. I think you have a little gem here that it being missed....I'll send the URL icq to a few buddies ~Heather |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed... I like it.. |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I was having such a lousy day (I even cried at work! *sniff*) But that just made me feel a little better... thanks. ~Kay "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
X Angel - Thanks, I needed that, so glad you liked it. Nan - Awwww, she's the cutest little angel, thanks. AniKay - Thanks so much, hope your day got better!!! Bonnie |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
I love your angel poems. I can picture it so vividly in my mind. my vote is for this one toooooo. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Lovely! Absolutely lovely! You are a very talented writer... vote's in here. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Beautifully written, you have my vote! Debbie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful, love the title... lovely writing and thoughts jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
beautiful poem. like the different spin on life and why we are here. nice read. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Bonnie! I love it! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully done. I enjoyed your poem very much. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Bonnie, I love this!! Beautiful!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Bonnie...this is beautiful. I had to take a second read however, because in the beginning when you were describing...emerald green eyes, dimples in pudgy cheeks, wearing a robe...I thought you were describing me on my way for coffee. The imagery is wonderful. Linda |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bonnie~ WOW this created the most wondrous images in my mind thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is angelically special..very good writing......click.... |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Linda,lol, Tracie & Ethome, Thank you all so much for reading and for your kind replies. They are so appreciated. Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bonnie this was stunning, gave me goose bumps. You got my vote girly. Juls |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very sweetly written I really enjoyed it. I also can picture our heavenly Father with all the children, such a beautiful site. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Wonderful poem! Very visual and heart warming. Definately a keeper!!! Life is not a spectator Sport! Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Juls, Heather & Michelle - Thank you all, so glad you enjoyed it. Bonnie |
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