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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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One goal one soul The wind that touched your face today And mine in gentle feel and play, Embraced us since our very birth, Forever with us on this earth. Our breath has touched and joined with those. In past and present since time arose. And you and I have touched before And will embrace forever more. So do not ever feel left out And do not ever harbor doubt, That you and I are tied as one And never will we be undone. We all encircle time and space, We live and die within this place. We are together in one goal, We are together as one soul. The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is that poem I love with many interpretations, and I love all of them, WE are all bound together, the same breeze touches us all. This is one heck of a poem Liz |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I feel the breeze upon my face..I hold this poem in my embrace. Lovely, Sy. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So very well put, Sy...an amazing poem! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I liked this one a lot, Seymour. Even though you didn't repeat the same lines in the first and last ones, the overall effect was that you did. I found the poem very gentle and sweet, and enjoyed your word choices. Thanks for sharing it. Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The wind that touched your face today And mine in gentle feel and play, Embraced us since our very birth, Forever with us on this earth. Our breath has touched and joined with those. In past and present since time arose. And you and I have touched before And will embrace forever more. ----------------- The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace. --------------- I remember this jewel of a poem... and I ADORE it... its PERFECT !!!!!! the sentiments of those last two lines are enchanting. later-gentle-breeze-gator jm baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Yep, I was looking for a book submission by the great Seymore... Add my vote  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I admire the gentle breezes that blew me to this place ... for just a chance to befriend the man with such poetic grace. 'The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace.' Love ya'- Poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A very nice poem. Reminds me that we are shaped by those very breezes, and are but the sum total of everyone who has had an effect on our lives. Thanks for the efflation. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace. A very Adorable piece from you Seymour... Wonderful indeed!!! regards, Sudhir < !signature--> Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Once more to all you lovely people above, my humble and sincere thanks. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Very well written and lovely poem, Sy! I especially enjoyed the closing lines, "The breeze that kissed you on the face, Has held me in the same embrace." You got MY vote! |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I am with doreen on this one, the whole poem was wonderful, but I especially love the feeling the ending leaves you with |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
*Vote* Do I need to add something? Yes I do, thank you for such a nice poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helmut, Corazon, Doreen, My friends thank you so much. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Finely written sir poet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Thank you for the vote. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oooh yep this is wonderful, so true, and so aptly written.  ~Heather |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Angel, Thanks for the vote. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
SY ive always loved yur stuff...voted i did |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayout, I thank you much. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh an amazing poem here Sy. loved it :0 voting Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, I'm into angels lately, thanks for the vote. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Sy this is so touching, very spiritual indeed  loved itTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply incredible, I loved it from beginning to end. Just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Thank you so much. *L* Bonnie, Such a beautiful comment. *L* |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
loved this! its beautiful.. "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dgnvarnor, Thanks for the vote and beautiful. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Well.. yes, it's the greatest, if a couple has common goals for their life together as one.. great poem (my interpretation may be wrong though)... - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very touching. I loved it so much. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Seymour! Enchanting! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all those I have not thanked I do so now. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
"The wind that touched your face today And mine in gentle feel and play, Embraced us since our very birth, Forever with us on this earth." Amen and amen!! Isn't He wonderful. This is to the reader that which they need, that which they read. Just beautiful! marcy |
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