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|never wanted to die
since 2000-06-04Posts 25
She Screams out loud
but doesn't make a sound
She fights for her life
but the demons drag her down
darkness fills her soul
fire burns her brain
the pills that should help her
soon become her escape
she falls to the floor
never to awake
her kids come to mind
but it's better for them this way
you must understand
she never wanted to die
she just wanted the pain to go away
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since 2000-06-17Posts 315
Suicide.. painful subject, dealt with well here. Keep up the good work. Nothing at all like my poems, but i liked it a lot.
since 2000-05-11Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
interesting perspective on a touchy subject. very well presented and great flow. hope this one makes it in.
P. J. Kotrch
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love
since 2000-02-16Posts 2637
Very good work here, and its a hard subject indeed.
"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"
since 2000-06-26Posts 3168
Interesting poem. Can be seen in several ways. I choose to see her crying out for help from her torment, but nobody hears. Very nice.
Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".
since 2000-07-19Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
I know what she was feeling
I'm feeling the same
Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.
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