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Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
She Screams out loud but doesn't make a sound She fights for her life but the demons drag her down darkness fills her soul fire burns her brain the pills that should help her soon become her escape she falls to the floor never to awake her kids come to mind but it's better for them this way you must understand she never wanted to die she just wanted the pain to go away |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Suicide.. painful subject, dealt with well here. Keep up the good work. Nothing at all like my poems, but i liked it a lot. Linda M. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
interesting perspective on a touchy subject. very well presented and great flow. hope this one makes it in. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Very good work here, and its a hard subject indeed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Interesting poem. Can be seen in several ways. I choose to see her crying out for help from her torment, but nobody hears. Very nice. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I know what she was feeling  I'm feeling the same hugs, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories. |
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