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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
It may seem that now, She is so far away, But I know in my heart, She is with you every moment of every day, Be it on Heaven or on Earth, She is with you always, And by the beautiful person you are, She is so amazed, She is like the diamond stars, In the dark velvet night, Always there shining brightly, But not always in sight, Her love for you, Is the warm sun that shines upon your tearstreaked face, So strong and so true, And from such a deep special place, The soft breeze that blows, And gently caresses your skin, Is her softly touching you, And quietly whispering, That you are so special, And that she lives in your heart, And to always remember, That you are never apart, Because she is always with you, No matter where you may be, For your souls are intertwined, Together eternally....... Don't feel alone. [This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
You certainly know how to keep me interested, all your poems so far have been beautiful...i hope you don't cease to write..Thanks moonshine... |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
lovely moonshine, fabulously worded, it got to me. Linda M. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jen, I remember this, wow, it is so really beautiful honey, I thank you so very much. *HUGS* Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This just makes ya wanna hug someone! Warm and fuzzy  Hon, you didn't flag this for a book...please edit so it can be voted on. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Beautiful sentiment. It does make you want to hug someone. Pete |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely reply Christopher - I hope I never cease to write either. Thanx for reading. Thanx for your reply Linda, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanx for your lovely reply M, I am glad that you still like this poem. Thanx for your lovely reply WhtDove and for reminding me to flag the poem : ) I really appreciate it. Thanx for your reply Pete, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yay!! now I can vote. Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mmm.. very nice.. what a lovely poem.. was this written especially for someone? ^_^ I think this is a worthy addition to the book.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
very lovingly and tenderly written...such warmth and grace Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your vote M You're a treasure!Thanx for your lovely reply and comment Lynne - to answer your question, yes this poem was written for a friend who is very dear to me. [This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely reply and comment Tracie, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
It is a tired term, but you really touched me with that one.. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o man this one spoke write to me i love it alot |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
good poem well written... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely reply Prometheus, I am glad that you were touched by my poem Thanx for your lovely reply and comment WOW Thanx for your reply Avanti, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem |
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