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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
The silence pierces me, As I sit in this darkness, Cold reaching all around me, Knifelike fingers plunging, Wickedly entangling themselves, In my broken soul, Cutting me to pieces, And slicing away, My final sliver of hope, Alone I am, My wounded heart pleading, To stop thudding, Inside my empty chest, I envite death, I challenge death, I scream to death, To sweep over me, And numb my pain, So I can end, And finally fade away....... |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
You certainly captured the emotion of this poem in so few words, this is an excellent piece, lots of wishes for happiness in life! |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
knives, slicing, ouch. This has got some pain behind it. Very good poem, made me wince and cringe. Linda M. p.s. I see you have been busy here today posting many poems. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
J, so much pain expressed here in so few words. Well Done  Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Thanx for your lovely reply and warm wishes Christopher - although my poems are dark, I do have lots of happiness in life Thanx Thanx for your reply Linda - I am glad you enjoyed this poem - yes you're right, I was busy yesterday posting a few poems. Thanx for your lovely reply M - I really appreciate your comments. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
dark, cold, to the point, but don't go anywhere if yanno what I mean Nice dark piece! ~Heather |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Um, no not really (???????) lol - but thanx for your reply anyway Heather [This message has been edited by Moonshine (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I know where this one is going ya know, back to the top! Had to read it again J Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Awww thanx M - I am glad you enjoyed my poem J. |
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