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Shadow's Dancing. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight Their steps aren't practiced, They're improvised And the results are there in the skies Shining like diamonds right before our eyes. In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight They move across the void With such effortless grace Their twists and turns bring a smile to my face And they're so easy to see from this high place. In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight Take my hand my love And let me lead Because you're the only partner I'll ever want and need And since I've met you, my life has been blessed indeed. -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Sven, Nice writing. Nice that you have found someone that makes you feel like dancing! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I must not be the only one who was taken with the phrase- moonlight shadows dancing- very nice sven jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I remember this phrase....lovely. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful images Sven... lovely tender emotions that challenge phrase brought such wonderful writing... glad you submitted yours jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent imagery Sven. Enjoyed this one very much. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Hit that button twice so I'll just reiterate my previous message and say excellent! [This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ I think we'll need an entire chapter to include these lovely poems from Hoot's challenge. A joy to read your thoughts, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
This is sunshine.....dancing in the shadows. *smiles* |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice Sven. You always have a way of such soft and gentle flow of words to your poems. A uninque quality indeed. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I see you in the moonlight dancing Under the stars so bright I see you in the moonlight dancing So free and easy tonight Under the moonlight dancing Taking to the floor with ease Under the moonlight dancing With the gentle summer nights breeze What a picture I have Of a wonderful moonlit dance Picturing you and me Care to dance with me by chance Lovely heartfelt picturesque poem Loved it Sven Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...another one from my challange |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This is really sweet Sven ~H |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Tender and loving Sven ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You have your own wordly way, my friend.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Indeed it is "dancing" !! Lovley Sven Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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