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Sven
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0 posted 2000-07-04 02:12 PM


In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight
Their steps aren't practiced,
          They're improvised
And the results are there in the skies
Shining like diamonds right before our eyes.

In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight
They move across the void
          With such effortless grace
Their twists and turns bring a smile to my face
And they're so easy to see from this high place.

In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight
Take my hand my love
          And let me lead
Because you're the only partner I'll ever want and need
And since I've met you, my life has been blessed indeed.

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
MagnoliaBlue
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1 posted 2000-07-04 03:28 PM


Sven, Nice writing.

Nice that you have found
someone that makes you
feel like dancing!  

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

Jamie
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2 posted 2000-07-04 04:10 PM


I must not be the only one who was taken with the phrase- moonlight shadows dancing-
very nice sven
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-07-04 04:54 PM


I remember this phrase....lovely.  
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-07-04 05:02 PM


beautiful images Sven...
lovely tender emotions
that challenge phrase brought such
wonderful writing...
glad you submitted yours
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Eloise
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5 posted 2000-07-04 06:46 PM


Excellent imagery Sven.  Enjoyed this one very much.  
Eloise
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6 posted 2000-07-04 06:47 PM


Hit that button twice so I'll just reiterate my previous message and say excellent!

[This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 07-04-2000).]

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-07-04 10:38 PM


Sven~
I think we'll need an entire chapter
to include these lovely poems from
Hoot's challenge.

A joy to read your thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-07-04 11:25 PM


This is sunshine.....dancing in the shadows.
*smiles*

Marina
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9 posted 2000-07-05 12:34 PM


Very nice Sven.  You always have a way of such soft and gentle flow of words to your poems.  A uninque quality indeed.

Marina


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Marina Crossley


tracie66
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10 posted 2000-07-06 06:01 AM


I see you in the moonlight dancing
Under the stars so bright
I see you in the moonlight dancing
So free and easy tonight

Under the moonlight dancing
Taking to the floor with ease
Under the moonlight dancing
With the gentle summer nights breeze

What a picture I have
Of a wonderful moonlit dance
Picturing you and me
Care to dance with me by chance

Lovely heartfelt picturesque poem
Loved it Sven  
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2000-07-06 09:03 AM


Ah...another one from my challange  
X Angel
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12 posted 2000-07-08 01:51 PM


This is really sweet Sven  
~H

Kit McCallum
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13 posted 2000-07-08 01:55 PM


Tender and loving Sven ... wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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14 posted 2000-07-08 08:06 PM


You have your own wordly way, my friend..
Dark Angel
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15 posted 2000-07-09 06:00 AM


Indeed it is "dancing" !! Lovley Sven  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

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