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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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If I Could Paint The World A splash of blue I’d throw to the wind, and watch it take flight, across the sky it would go to meet the morning light. The greens I’ve picked from dark to light, tossing here and there, to make the trees and shrubs twirl in delight. Pinks and reds all shades do I use to fill the hearts of people everywhere, who does not enjoy the melody that these colors bring to the souls plight. The sun does shine with its light so bright, but not quite enough yellow for me, so I will sweep the land with daisies sunflowers and daffodils. We still need more color to fill the hearts that just stay in despair so how about some purple and some umber and maybe a little splash of white to let them know that their hearts desires can come true. To top off this paining of mine I will add the secret touch of life’s pleasures and place the birds and bees just so in hopes to see a smile from all of you to let you know just how much I care. You see, your day can be any thing you want it to be, all it takes is a little paint some imagination and a heart to fill in the beauty of life’s dreams. By, Cerenity |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Cerenity, You have painted some of the most marvelous hues of colours here with your beautiful writing...very appealing... Keep Painting!!! regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Wonderful concept, beautiful thoughts, a portrait painted from the heart. Keep it up. Pete [This message has been edited by Not A Poet (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another natures work or art by you... as always such lovely imagery perfect choice jm |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Sudhir, Pete, Janet, Thank you so much for your kind replys, this was a fun poem to write. Cerenity |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
What a colourful poem  It just brightened my day up, thanks.Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Eric, You are so welcome, and thank you for reading and replying to my poem, Cerenity |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Cerenity!! yes my day can be anything I want it to be!! You see, your day can be any thing you want it to be, all it takes is a little paint some imagination and a heart to fill in the beauty of life’s dreams. how true! you have my vote  It's been too many nights of being with to now be suddenly without "Jewel" |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
This was really good. And it too brightened my otherwise grey day ~H |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
a lovely thought Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity, I've got a whole new pallate for you to paint with!! Just wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ The canvas of your heart springs to life with vivid coloring. Wonderful, dear one. 'I will sweep the land with daisies sunflowers and daffodils.' YES ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
I like all your thoughts and imagery here. If we could only do this, this world would be awesome. Thank you for the read. It was very beautiful. |
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