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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enter the garden of your soul reach for your hand there A rose, so fragrant, is tucked in the wildness of my flowing hair You lead me to the center where a small pond reflects in blue myriad colors of flowers as I lay down there with you A bird sings in far off distance In the water, a fish splashes in glee we lay with only our breath between us our love, our passion free In your garden I have found a love so peaceful and sublime never leaving, I give myself to you now and for all time. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! This is so beautiful, Sharon, tender and passionate! I love it! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully written. Wonderful poetry. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, this is so lovely and sensual and romantic and just...oh..sigh! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sharon' How passionate and romantic! Swoooon! I love the flow and beauty of this poem. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sharon, simply beautiful! What an enchanting and romantic 'garden' that you has penned. Please take my vote  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Such a passionate poem Sharon, it's beautiful!! and these lines..... we lay with only our breath between us our love, our passion free hmmmmmm, Lovely My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sharon/PDV, a wonderful image nad excellent poem. lovely. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Ahhhhh ! The romantic in me likes this one very, very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Woohoo! Romantic you! I love this one  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This LoveBug just fell in love with this romantic work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"we lay with only our breath between us" Oh, such a lovely line to compliment this picturesque and romantic poem Poet deVine! So tender and loving ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
A beautiful homage to the consumptive poets of the Romantic Era. *applauds wildly and drops a ballot in the slot* Alicat |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Poet~ this is so soft and romantic! I love that kind of poetry.... This is just beautiful! -SEA * vote*Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Poet deVine, A lovely poem with a wonderful romance-lit shine... regards, Sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
How tender and sweet...this is lovely, Ms. Poet ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Ahh! Sounds like you've found your perfect soul mate. Beautiful! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your garden grows DIVINE  GORGEOUS poem PD... perfect!!!!!! sensual and beautiful like the poet who wrote it jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ACCCCCK OOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGG SHE DID IT! SHE DID IT! SHE DID IT! *phew* you rolled nature and sensuality into one poem and left me breathless! Oh I love dis one Sharon, I do! I do!  |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
may I add my sigh here? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is just so lovely. Liz |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
so lovely, sharon... really beautiful! can't wait to read it in print. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Back on top where you belong! I'm so jealous! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all..this is one of my favorites.  |
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