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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Love Locked in Time ~~~ I'm feeling strange very weak ... like floating in time no itch ... no twitch lost memories climb ~ Eternity slips to tireless eyes while dreams of past moments awake my surprise ~ All sense like a dream all fragrance ... from mind your touch ... I remember your love locked in time ~ In blackness ... a bloom realities' fright I'm lost in my doom in my death blackest night ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ This is certainly a worthy post. Softly and tenderly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sad and beautiful written. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Rex. Quite a departure from your usual lighthearted witty poems, but very well done! Denise p.s. Nice to finally see you! Great picture! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Rex this flows sooo beautifully yet sooo full of sadness!!! I enjoyed it very much!! Thank You!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
painful and sad but so that itself is it's beauty...good work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
I like this one Rex...it has my vote..reminded me of Jim Morrison's style...you should be proud! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Marge ... thankyou ... always nice to hear from you Munda ... thankyou for the kind reply Denise ... thankyou and thankyou again ... possibly I might go back to just writing comedy ... It appeared better received Bridgette ... thakyou ... you're very kind AVANTI ... thankyou for reading Christopher ... thankyou ... that's quite a complement Mike ... thankyou ... good to hear from you |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I liked the sound of this, maybe it is the haunting sound of Jim mOrrison, but it could certainly be put to music. Very enchanting writing Liz |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
nice nice nice great great great good job Rex I liked it! ~Heather |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rex, This is wonderful, you are so talented, so much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou very much Elizabeth very nice of you to say that Heather now that's a reply that's tough to beatthankyou Cerenity ... so very nice of you to say that |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
What can I say but wow, now that is a poem, moving and just amazing. I wish I could write like that. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, I do love your witty poems but your romantic ones are great too! So maybe you could continue to write both! Denise |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
dark, but soft at the same time Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Rex I know your a man of many muses but I love this one Love Tracie~ wonderful read dear friend.... Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Rex: Haunting and romantic. You evoke so much depth of feeling and put it all together in poetic bliss. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ell |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have great versatility in your poetry, Rex, an admirable quality |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
How tenderly you've captured such sadness. This is beautiful. Bonnie |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sadness was expressed exquisitely. Kathleen |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Rex.....a fine piece here..... I have been away slaying other dragons and missed you adding your picture....you are quite the handsome devil you!!!!  }PS: Somehow I thought you were an old guy! Robert |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Just got home from Michigan ... was not expecting all this attention Beverley ... Thankyou ... but don't be wishing yourself down to my level Denise ... thankyou ... I'll try to write in whatever style that people prefer Jamie ... thankyou for the kind reply tracie ... you're very kind ... thankyou Ellie ... thankyou ... I guess it was just the mood I was in the night I wrote it Balladeer ... thankyou ... you set a great example ... you make everyone strive to be better Bonnie ... thankyou ... as I mentioned before ... I guess it was the mood Kathleen ... it's very kind of you to say that ... thankyou Robert ... thankyou ... I was an old guy ... but I'm younger now ... as you can see |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is really very beautiful...voting... K |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
read it, loved it. A sense of love emanating from the softness of your dream. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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