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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2000-06-24 06:10 AM


Hope this is ok for here.

Morning Lovers
by Linda Munday

Hearts that touched the night before
Joined as one our passion sure
Flowing together like river wide
Wake to see you by my side

Chirping alarm I stretch and feel
Your body warm, my love for real
Gently roll and kiss your face
Obedient hand your shape I trace

One eye opens, I see you smile
You reach for me, and in a while
After kisses deep, and touch afire
We love again, fulfill desire.



[This message has been edited by linda munday (edited 06-24-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Linda Munday - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-24 08:21 PM


Linda this is sensual and beautiful
wonderful with soft desire...
please come back and edit to submit for the book so we can vote
jm

linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
2 posted 2000-06-24 08:52 PM


Just for you jm... ticked the box.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

3 posted 2000-06-24 08:54 PM


Delicate with a hint of sensuality .. this poem is sweet!
=) Coco =)

Denise
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4 posted 2000-06-24 08:56 PM


Beautifully done, Linda!

Denise

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-06-24 09:32 PM


why thank you my dear  
so glad you "submitted" to my wishes LOL
great poem...
love em when they're sweet and spicy  
take care jm

baby-dont you work so hard
for this prize you've found ...
it will all be gone-when you turn around ...
cause nothing lasts forever anyway.
Rick R

Christopher J
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 94

6 posted 2000-06-25 01:20 AM


I thought this was a good poem...good to see different types of poems here..
X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
7 posted 2000-06-28 01:18 PM


I enjoy poetry that can be sensual without sexual. Nice job!

~Heather

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
8 posted 2000-07-30 02:00 AM


Linda,

Very much enjoyed, thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Gossamerwings
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 207

9 posted 2000-07-30 04:27 AM


Lovely,sweet poem!  

Gossamerwings ;)

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
10 posted 2000-07-30 08:18 PM


Enjoyed the reading. Very good.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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