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With My Eyes Closed... |
jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
in the darkness of your room we whisper in white sheets with warm skin I tell you that I love you I open my heart naked and give it to you you say you are crying you say with my fingertips you touch your eyes but I feel no tears I can't see you in the dark tonight the pang is still real in my chest it's still as bare and naked as I was to you so beautiful and pure in the dark with my eyes closed |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sometimes, we must close our eyes in order to see. Think you expressed this well. Welcome to Passions! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to passions! Great poem!!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I felt myself reading this with a whisper! Nicely done! |
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