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With My Eyes Closed...

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-06-24 01:56 AM

in the darkness
of your room

we whisper
in white sheets
with
warm skin

I tell you
that I love you

I open my heart
naked
and give it to you

you say
you are crying

you say

with my
fingertips
you touch your eyes

but I feel no tears
I can't see you
in the dark
tonight

the pang
is still real
in my chest

it's still as bare
and naked
as I was
to you

so beautiful
and pure
in the dark

with my eyes
closed

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-06-30 03:33 PM

Sometimes, we must close our eyes in order to see. Think you expressed this well.
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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2000-06-30 05:00 PM

Welcome to passions! Great poem!!!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-07-01 11:55 AM

I felt myself reading this with a whisper! Nicely done!

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