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SEA
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0 posted 2000-06-18 11:56 PM



Take me dancing
let your heart be free
moving across the floor
with your arms around me

Hold me close
rock me just right
like making love
deep in the night

Let the rhythm
make us one
our song of love
has just begun.

-SEA-

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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1 posted 2000-06-19 12:36 PM


A beautiful song it is too!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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2 posted 2000-06-19 02:30 AM


SEA,
I'll live, love and laugh with you anyday! How do you say it? Oh yes:   . D'oh, I mean  . These candy buttons are confusing.

Mike

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 06-19-2000).]

SEA
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Mike~ You are a sweet one! Thank you!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-06-19 05:44 AM


Just lovely SEA!  Beautiful sentiments, and written in so few words. Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

X Angel
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5 posted 2000-06-19 01:34 PM


short, sweet, to the point

I like!
~H

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6 posted 2000-06-20 07:41 AM


Loved it!!  Definately a favorite of mine, of yours!!  
Bridgette


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7 posted 2000-06-21 05:06 AM


Oh, I like this one lots.
tracie66
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8 posted 2000-06-21 06:05 AM


Lovely words of love  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Colin
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9 posted 2000-06-22 06:45 AM


Reminds me of a special dance I had a long time ago  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

brian madden
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10 posted 2000-06-23 02:30 PM


a wonderful poem, the song of love sounds sweet and has a good beat.. sorry.  
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11 posted 2000-06-23 04:47 PM


This LoveBug LOVES this poem! You have my vote!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Martie
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12 posted 2000-06-23 06:19 PM


A beautiful love poem, Sea!
Janet Marie
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13 posted 2000-06-23 07:16 PM


ooohh love that second verse sea-girl ...
wow...rock away
great poem
jm

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14 posted 2000-06-23 09:29 PM


Excellent poem!
May I cut in!

Denise
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15 posted 2000-06-23 09:52 PM


Very soft and beautiful, SEA!  

Denise

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16 posted 2000-06-30 03:29 AM


I hear your love song singing!
SEA
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17 posted 2000-07-01 12:22 PM


I just wanted to tell all who stopped by to read this, thank you.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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