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since 2000-04-01
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0 posted 2000-06-23 12:59 PM

You come like a dream
and leave like a nightmare
you give me your love
only to take it away
you show me that you care
only to deny me of yourself
we shared the passion once before
why not share it once again?
Love me like you use to
Don't be a stranger like you once were,
Show me the feelings that u felt in the past,
Let there be a future between us,
Let there be you and I,
Remember the first time we met,
Two total strangers looking for love,
let us not go back to that time,
I cannot take the pain any longer,
Why must you deny me of your love?
Do you see how you bleed when you cut yourself?
That is the way my heart bleeds when you stop loving me,
Why must you end what we have between us?
No reason, no explanation, no notice that u have left me,
I don't want to lose your love,
or your special touch,
I can't live without the smell of your hair in my face,
and without your lips on my lips,
without your hand in my hand,
without your love in my heart,
and without your soul with my soul,
let there be love where it once was,
coping with emptiness all this time
from which I can't seem to unwind,
Why can't you be kind?
as you break this bind,
The bind that was made,
by none other than ourselves.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2000-06-24 10:25 PM

A lot of deep and honest feeling shown here!!  Very nice!!

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Christopher J
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94

2 posted 2000-06-25 01:24 AM

what a wonderful poem...i can relate to this, hope you have more poems i can read!
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
3 posted 2000-06-25 10:15 AM

Very very nice...


Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
4 posted 2000-06-29 04:35 PM

Hi Xeonox,

Very enjoyable read, thank you.


since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
5 posted 2000-06-29 07:05 PM

WOW! You show real emotions and give complete honesty here..I'm impressed. This is a great poem.  

love & all,

I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-06-29 07:43 PM

I can totally relate to this poem. It shows
a lot of REAL emotion. Well done!

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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
7 posted 2000-10-05 06:41 AM

Wow.  Very open and honest.  I'll be searching for more of your work.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

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