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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You come like a dream and leave like a nightmare you give me your love only to take it away you show me that you care only to deny me of yourself we shared the passion once before why not share it once again? Love me like you use to Don't be a stranger like you once were, Show me the feelings that u felt in the past, Let there be a future between us, Let there be you and I, Remember the first time we met, Two total strangers looking for love, let us not go back to that time, I cannot take the pain any longer, Why must you deny me of your love? Do you see how you bleed when you cut yourself? That is the way my heart bleeds when you stop loving me, Why must you end what we have between us? No reason, no explanation, no notice that u have left me, I don't want to lose your love, or your special touch, I can't live without the smell of your hair in my face, and without your lips on my lips, without your hand in my hand, without your love in my heart, and without your soul with my soul, let there be love where it once was, coping with emptiness all this time from which I can't seem to unwind, Why can't you be kind? as you break this bind, The bind that was made, by none other than ourselves. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A lot of deep and honest feeling shown here!! Very nice!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
what a wonderful poem...i can relate to this, hope you have more poems i can read! |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very very nice... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Xeonox, Very enjoyable read, thank you. Cerenity |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
WOW! You show real emotions and give complete honesty here..I'm impressed. This is a great poem. love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
I can totally relate to this poem. It shows a lot of REAL emotion. Well done! Di |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Wow. Very open and honest. I'll be searching for more of your work. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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