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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-06-22 02:48 PM



Mist So Beautiful


It appears as if Gods fingers are
rambling through the
mountains, as the  fog penetrates
the valleys below.

Feeling the earth with gentle touch
roaming at free will,
filling all lower terrain with a
billowy white wet mist
coming endlessly forward.

Collecting in its memory the patterns
of the earth following
paths well penetrated before on
previous trips, moving
onward to add new ground never
before touched.

The mountain tops stand majestically
tall above this awesome
sight, soaking in to its base this traveling
mist forever will leave
some of its glory behind to give to nature
and help replenish doing
its part in the grand scheme of life and
the cycle in which it was created.

As the sun comes forward the fog retreats
back to where it came,
leaving a trail of thankful earth in
dampened delight and
a memory I shall cherish always
upon my mind.

God did come and touch something,
he touched my heart
with his magnificent glory seen in this
mist so beautiful to
the eye and I give him praise.


By,  Cerenity




[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 06-22-2000).]

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Colin
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
1 posted 2000-06-22 03:03 PM


Wanderlust strikes! Suddenly I want to breath mountain air again.

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-22 03:29 PM


so beautiful indeed...
another gem of natures glory from your pen
perfect choice to reflect your work here

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
3 posted 2000-06-22 06:34 PM


Serenely beautiful. I'll go hikin with ya Eric! Howsabouts the Highlands eh?

~Heather

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-06-22 10:41 PM


Cerenity~
Oh, hon ... these are beautiful thoughts from your heart ... how lovely !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-06-22 11:40 PM


Beautiful imagery, thoughts and faith here.
A lovely piece, this should go in the book, you got my vote hon!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2000-06-23 07:38 AM


Hi Everyone,

Thank you so much for you kind replys,

Love,  Cerenity

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
7 posted 2000-06-23 03:28 PM


amazing and stunningly beautiful. impossible to pick a favourite line here.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
8 posted 2000-06-24 05:50 PM


This poem is so beautiful and sshould go in the book. I hope you also post the Angel wings poem. I tried to e-mail you but couldn't get through. I'm in Mt View Calif until Tues.then I'll be back to my computer. Maybe that has something to do with it
Love ya
Liz

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

9 posted 2000-06-24 06:45 PM


Beautiful poem. A very enjoyable read.
bsquirrel
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10 posted 2000-06-24 06:50 PM


Cerenity,
Mmmm, this reminds me of driving through Malibu early in the morning, with the fog all around you on the hills and in the ravines -- and even as you travel through it, the fog looks far ahead.

Mike

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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11 posted 2000-06-24 09:00 PM


Very beautiful, Cerenity!

Denise

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
12 posted 2000-06-25 02:00 AM


Hi everyone,

I am so sorry for not getting back sooner to tell you all how much I am thankful for your kind words I needed them today so much.

Thanks again,
love,  Cerenity

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
13 posted 2000-06-25 10:22 AM


Beautiful cerentiy...just beautiful....

chris< !signature-->

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.




[This message has been edited by CMGrimm (edited 06-25-2000).]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

14 posted 2000-07-06 06:22 PM


Loved the imagery, Loved the poem, Beautiful!    

It's been
too many nights
of being with

to now be suddenly
without
"Jewel"

BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
15 posted 2000-07-14 11:36 PM


What a perfectly serene picture you've brushed with your pen Cerenity, this is so beautiful.  Bonnie
AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
16 posted 2000-07-14 11:42 PM


beautiful poem , very well written
great work

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

17 posted 2000-07-15 08:08 AM


beautifully written. enjoyed your poem muchly.
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
18 posted 2000-07-15 09:44 AM


Hi Everyone,

Thank you so much, it was a sight I will never forget and this is how I could share it with the world.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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