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Mist So Beautiful |
Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Mist So Beautiful It appears as if Gods fingers are rambling through the mountains, as the fog penetrates the valleys below. Feeling the earth with gentle touch roaming at free will, filling all lower terrain with a billowy white wet mist coming endlessly forward. Collecting in its memory the patterns of the earth following paths well penetrated before on previous trips, moving onward to add new ground never before touched. The mountain tops stand majestically tall above this awesome sight, soaking in to its base this traveling mist forever will leave some of its glory behind to give to nature and help replenish doing its part in the grand scheme of life and the cycle in which it was created. As the sun comes forward the fog retreats back to where it came, leaving a trail of thankful earth in dampened delight and a memory I shall cherish always upon my mind. God did come and touch something, he touched my heart with his magnificent glory seen in this mist so beautiful to the eye and I give him praise. By, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Wanderlust strikes! Suddenly I want to breath mountain air again. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so beautiful indeed... another gem of natures glory from your pen perfect choice to reflect your work here |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Serenely beautiful. I'll go hikin with ya Eric! Howsabouts the Highlands eh? ~Heather |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Oh, hon ... these are beautiful thoughts from your heart ... how lovely ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful imagery, thoughts and faith here. A lovely piece, this should go in the book, you got my vote hon! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for you kind replys, Love, Cerenity |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
amazing and stunningly beautiful. impossible to pick a favourite line here. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This poem is so beautiful and sshould go in the book. I hope you also post the Angel wings poem. I tried to e-mail you but couldn't get through. I'm in Mt View Calif until Tues.then I'll be back to my computer. Maybe that has something to do with it Love ya Liz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautiful poem. A very enjoyable read. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Cerenity, Mmmm, this reminds me of driving through Malibu early in the morning, with the fog all around you on the hills and in the ravines -- and even as you travel through it, the fog looks far ahead. Mike |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Cerenity! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi everyone, I am so sorry for not getting back sooner to tell you all how much I am thankful for your kind words I needed them today so much. Thanks again, love, Cerenity |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Beautiful cerentiy...just beautiful.... chris< !signature--> Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. [This message has been edited by CMGrimm (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Loved the imagery, Loved the poem, Beautiful! It's been too many nights of being with to now be suddenly without "Jewel" |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a perfectly serene picture you've brushed with your pen Cerenity, this is so beautiful. Bonnie |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
beautiful poem , very well written great work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautifully written. enjoyed your poem muchly. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much, it was a sight I will never forget and this is how I could share it with the world. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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