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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I simply do not have the heart to stand within these rules of game. Do you not know? Can you not see? I stand before you, changed. Have you not read? Do you not feel? My words? My heart? Sincerity? I pray I'm not left, lonely, here... Did all my hurt blow past your ear? Did you not say you'd dry my tears? My God, it is too lonely here... My pen is cursed-- it writes in tears. Tell me I'm not wrong again. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, if I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion spent? Be merciful. Be kind to me. Speak to me cruel clarity. Command the tide, "Return to sea..." Tell me you've no need of me. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Ohh I know this feeling! Good'un!  ~H |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
so painful and passionate...and well done! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Pulling the vote lever... excellent verse! really fine writing! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Serenity, so sadly-passionate. Filled with Pain. *hugs* Excellent writing! you have my vote  Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I simply do not have the heart to stand within these rules of game. Do you not know? Can you not see? I stand before you, changed. ------------------- Did all my hurt blow past your ear? Did you not say you'd dry my tears? My God, it is too lonely here... My pen is cursed-- it writes in tears. Tell me I'm not wrong again. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, if I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion spent? ---------- *holding up mirrors*... my you look SO familar... why you look like me  ...*sigh*(of resignation) you know that i know that you know...(yada yada) i know i FEEL this poem... and Im about ready to get them a seeing eye dog and dark glasses... BLIND AS BATS they are me loves ya me baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A dramatical piece and very well done. So well that I could feel the pain within. Just don't forget we always will need thee. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, you have such talent, this would be great in the book. Parker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Passionately commanding plea. Enjoyed, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanted to thank you all again...appreciate it much. I go now to read... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
blankity blankity blankity this was good yuh |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Such sorrow and longing, very heartfelt poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank ye much, walt, was good to hear from yuh--blankity back atchya... and Tracie66--my much appreciation... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Tell me I'm not wrong again. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, if I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion spent? oooooooh....scary what a picture you have painted!< !signature--> All my love, Jeffrey [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 06-30-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... passionate...painful...and still beautiful... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I really think most of the time it does... Did all my hurt blow past your ear? Better tomorrows are coming |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Did all my hurt blow past your ear? Did you not say you'd dry my tears? My God, it is too lonely here... My pen is cursed-- it writes in tears. Tell me I'm not wrong again. Lie to me or call me "friend". Whisper, if I must relent-- must I blow ash of passion spent? Fantastic words!!! So well done that I voted. Linda M. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all, and just a spin again--me shameless... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed muchly. add a vote. |
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