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Genesis Evermore..............A True Story |
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Genesis Evermore A shy little boy of only eight Handed her a single red rose Childhood friends and forever soul mates So here is how the story goes To the senior prom they went A red rose fragrant her corsage Such power to its scent True love could never a mirage Giggling, she threw the bouquet From the steps of the church Red roses for her wedding day No more would they search Years gone and times changed But not the garden they had grown Their proof of unity, never estranged Heart to heart, they will never walk alone 10 years since he departed Still she receives roses from her groom A reminder of how love got started That stretches beyond tomb The bush that he planted Only blooms but one day a year For a love that was never taken for granted She recalls with a tear Their anniversary, a day she holds dear A miracle rose straight from his shore Two different realms, but one message is clear. With a soul mate bringsā¦Genesis evermore It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Di Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19Ontario, Canada |
Very touching. Oh, to find such a love!!! ~People shine from the inside out~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautiful poem Marina ... I bought a new millenium rose for our anniversary ... I hope I don't have to die so that my wife can receive roses forever more Rex |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well its about time my poetic princess.. i was hoping you would submit this one... (im always asking ya to submit) LOL ANYWAY.....ahem...LOL you know I love this awesome poem (both versions) LOL(sorry...couldnt resist) it was just too easy...LOL .. OK Im done now .... (too much caffeine me thinks) later poet gator me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
No doubt eh!! I have to go with Jan on this one Marina. . .you really need to submit more!! Just wonderful!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Di, thank you I am glad you liked it. Rex, LOL.....I am sure you won't!! Jm, girl you can't let it go can ya?? LOL And about this submit thing.....Gemini put you up to it , didn't she??? Sven, I appreciate your support EH!!! Let's go get a Canadian beer!!! Marina Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
I remember this one from Open 8. Glad you submitted it. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
WOW! This was an incredible read ~H |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Martinque and Heather, thank you both very much!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
I love this...something sweet and satisfying about it! Great writing! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Marina... well, I also love writing love poems, and though i have true feelings, they are hard to describe with words, your poem has just reminded me what love should be like and you have my biggest appreciation here.. (It's as if the poem's narrated one's life, so touching, I really want to see more of your poems..Marina).... I want to give you at least 100 votes for this one.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marina, This is so... ... Breathtakingly lovely I remember this one vividly from Open... and a great poem too...enjoyed reading this again... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, thank very much. Your compliments and posts mean a great deal to me. I am humbled by your post. Thank you once again. Sudhir, thank you my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is one of my favorites of yours. A wonderful story. It deserves a chance. James |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I loved this so much. Thank you for sharing. Love does go on forever till death!!!!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James,thank you Heather, glad you liked it and thank you Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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