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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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"Bald Hill" Where am I, on this deserted cliff edge Where the night's not clear yet very clear Taking in the beauty, I rest upon the sand wedge Feeling bizarre but surprisingly not feeling any fear A breeze caresses my face as it blows The night air calm with a sense of magic The mystic moon overwhelms me as it glows Not to have experienced this would be so tragic The dark clouds forming such beautiful figures Finally breaking and passing slowly by the moon In awe as I watch such a sight, my mind it triggers This night this sky this moment, a time most opportune This place, an eerie feeling about the night As she shines brightly upon calm waters below La Luna, Oh how she beckons me to take full flight As I am seduced, by her surrounding halo of golden glow Excitement takes over as I feel a sudden chill I want to visit here again, this place they call, Bald Hill. One of my first posts at Passions. Angel of Darkness< !signature--> My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I remember this one!! It's so lovely..peaceful...thank you for bringing it back!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW this is gorgeous... amazing imagery... jm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey angel! I remember this one so well!   [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Bald Hill sounds like a very eerie, yet very alluring place! Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you Sharon, I was glad to Thanks Janet Marie glad you liked Angel, yep goes back a while Thanks for reading Eric, yep thats exactly how it is ThanksMy grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was a dark stormy type piece (emotionally so) and I really could relate. Good job! ~H |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
XAngel thanks so very much My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Awesome M, You capture the moment well. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Dark Angel, I loved the mood and truth of this, and I know exactly what you're talking about. Mike |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This piece made me want to dash outside and emrace the night!. Lovely. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Just to Vote for it!! Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey J, Thanks os much hon bsquirrel, Thanks for your lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed Sweet Jamie, yep that is exactley what I did.. enbraced it. Thank you for your comment and your vote Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
mortified i missed this M ... ~tick~ lol thanks MP |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Awww you are a sweetie MP Thank you!! your MM Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
DA - Bald Hill, from the way your words painted it, sounds like a place I'd like to go. This is beautiful. Bonnie |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
It's such a sacred place. I would love to visit there as well. We all need our own space and time, dont we? A perfect book candidate. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh DA and what a first post..pure magic SUPERB Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very lovely visions of a place you seem to know well. Great poem Liz |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DA~ this is so vivid, I loved the images this brought to mind! *VOTE* -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you helped me see this place i like it |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Loved this one, DA. Remember it well my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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