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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway 
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Mesmerized Reflections through a plastic window, a sun playing on the other side, touching it with bared fingers. So mesmerized. Forgetting time and place, feeling warmth from the other side, just looking with his eyes. Mesmerized... |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
hey it's great to see short poems that are just as good as long ones...well done! |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Glad you liked it. I tend to write short poems, it's more my style. =) |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
mmmmm nice!  kudos fly! ~Heather |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do soo agree with the above!!! Well Done!!  Bridgette"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
A sparkling poem I like. Eric.< !signature--> "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. [This message has been edited by Eric Williams (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You said everything that needed to be said. You got my vote. Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool poem.... loved the feel of it welcome to passions take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FlyHigh~ Enjoyable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A little gem...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nicely written. Enjoyed. |
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