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Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-06-29 11:09 PM

                    My Gemini Dream

Poof, spark, sizzle, sizzle
I wasn't watching when it hit me
Cupid's arrow of love and the devil's lust
I was captive
Trapped by that aura of mystery
that constantly hovers around you.

Your crooked, mischievous smile
that makes your lips look just that way.
You know the way I mean,
it makes my mouth water and my lips tingle
with a hunger that can only be quenched
by the touch of yours.
The sway of your body
as you walk on those long, wrap around me legs.
The sound of those pointed, black cowboy boots
as they mosie on over.
The feel of your warm hands,
calloused by endless miles hangin' on to that wheel.
Those dancing blue eyes
that I love to get lost in.
Your ability to make me laugh and giggle
like the little girl that I used to be.
The essence of you
has me sleeping with your laundry.
I save phone messages
so I can hear your voice at every whim
And I prefer not to change the sheets.
We go together like
peanut butter and jam,
peaches and cream,
a bolt and a screw.
A perfect fit, that's me and you.

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© Copyright 2000 Di - All Rights Reserved
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-06-29 11:20 PM

Another Smitten Poet!!
Isn't Love grand?..jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669
Michigan, US
2 posted 2000-06-29 11:38 PM

We always enjoy seeing a "First Post" in the forums, Di, and that's particularly true when it's as beautifully written as My Gemini Dream. I fully expected a grand entrance from you. And you haven't disappointed yet.  

For those who don't know, Di may be a new Member of the Passionate forums, but she's hardly new to Passions. Her poetry at the main site remains among our most popular, month after month, and I'm very excited to see some new work from her.

Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-06-30 12:03 PM

Thanks for the warm welcome Ron  
Happy to be here among mates.

As for love, seems to come and go. Thanks for reading me.

Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
4 posted 2000-06-30 12:07 PM

Love this poem...I can relate to sleeping with the laundry...ahhh, sweet love makes you crazy.  I'm so glad you posted this!

Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
5 posted 2000-06-30 12:28 PM

Di there's something about blue eyes isn't there? Glad to see you posting among us! Awfully romantic this is    I sure hope we get to see more from you around here!

Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-06-30 01:43 PM

This could only be written by a woman who has the cowboy of her dreams...

I like this a lot!  Welcome to Passions, Di!  Hope to see you posting more, and soon!


~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2000-06-30 02:29 PM

Welcome to this side of Passions!!! We Main Siters need to welcome each other! I've sent you something special and hope you like it. If you need my help or have a question, please contact me!! Again. Welcome...and with such a lovely poem!!! I look forward to reading more from you, Di.  
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697

8 posted 2000-06-30 04:40 PM

Welcome to the Passionate Forums, my friend! This is a beautiful first post, you have my vote!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
9 posted 2000-06-30 04:58 PM

Allow me to welcome and thank you at the same time! I've read this on the main site! Loved it then, love it now!

doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
10 posted 2000-06-30 06:40 PM

sensual, upbeat, engaging, delightful... oh how nice it must be to be in love! Enjoy it, Di... life is so very short...

voting this one in!

Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
11 posted 2000-06-30 07:46 PM

Passionate Di, verily you have my, that is.  I've read a few of your other works on the main site, and I'm glad you finally found the forums.  Thank you for being part of our Passionate Family.

Alicat, the Persnikitty
aka Alastair Adamson

[This message has been edited by Alicat (edited 07-01-2000).]

Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

12 posted 2000-06-30 08:17 PM

Welcome to the forums, Di! I look forward to reading more from you! Your poem is beautifully done!


[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 06-30-2000).]

Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
13 posted 2000-06-30 08:30 PM

I absolutely love the "sleeping with the laundry" and "not changing the sheets"... I'm giggling here...

Welcome to the forums, Di... Nice to see you on this side of the site..

Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
14 posted 2000-06-30 10:14 PM

hehe. I love it, Di. I haven't changed sheets, either, since my girl left. (the first 5 years were the hardest  ) A big welcome  here!!!!  
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

15 posted 2000-07-01 09:16 PM

Hi and add my welcome to the list
and my admiration of this
very cool poem...
loved the sensuality of it ...
great expressions of desire and anticipation
take care

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

16 posted 2000-07-02 08:08 AM

Wonderful poetry.  Enjoyed muchly.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
17 posted 2000-07-02 11:24 AM

For me, it's a pillowcase I shared with my true love  


"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Junior Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 19
Ontario, Canada
18 posted 2000-07-02 11:28 AM

Hi JM  
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I'm really
glad you liked it.

To Mike,
Thank you   and Gemini Dream is about a "Mike" lol

Dear Eric,
Nice that you can relate to the "scent" thing. Thanks for reading my poem.

~People shine from the inside out~

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