Open Poetry #9 |
I Have Loved You Forever |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
From the moment we met, To the first touch of your kiss, I had felt your love before, From the moment our eyes did connect, I was feeling bliss, I never knew of a love like this, I have loved you forever, From the time the stars were created in the sky, I have loved you forever, Where souls meet and collide, I have loved you forever,...and ever...'till the day I die, You have been right there all along, You are my joy, My happiness, my song, And when dreams are shattered and torn, Your love embraces my heart to keep it warm, And when tears fall from my eyes, Your laughter wipes them away, Brings sunshine to my skies, I have loved you forever, Forever you've been in my heart, I have loved you forever, Forever was just the start.... For we have always known, That our love was meant to be, Your heart can speak volumes, without saying a word to me, I have always knew you were the one, The one who completes me, makes me whole, My lover, my friend, the other half to my soul, I have loved you forever, Forever and ever till I die, I have loved you forever, And forever you'll be by my side.... Forever and ever....I have loved you, I will love you...for the rest of my life......... By (Millette Addison) [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very very romantic, beautiful as the stars in the sky. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks rosebud..it started as a poem then became a song... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, This was a beautiful song my friend. So sweet and touching. Total devotion to the one you love and always will. So happy to see your romantic poetry here tonight. This was wonderful. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is beautiful RH. I hope you showed it to him. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SO tell me....has he heard you sing it to him yet? I hope so. Beautiful and tender and sung from the heart. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Absolutely outstanding! Loving, passionate, tender and touching to say the least. Very well written and expressed. Great job Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
RH, this is a lovely song, seems to be a lot of songs around here lately. Also seems your heart is alite, and songs from such a heart are beautiful. Glad to see your pen again. Parker |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
i love this song, it's beauty shines as clear as the love it contains. Well sung! |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
What a beautiful love song indeed. Sing it again RH. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
RH, simply beautiful. That is the type of love one can easily grow old with. Splendid verse. Alicat |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW!!I LOVE YOU ALL!!!THANKS SO MUCH I NEED THE ENCOURAGEMENT!!!!GoTTA RUN!! Mark..I haven't sung it fo anyone yet??? [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
"WOW" this is one lucky guy! I hope you keep him singing your tune forever! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Millete I Love to see your heart happy. Totally enjoyed the last lines the most. "Forever and ever...I have loved you, I will love you...for the rest of my life." That is my desire also...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Jfilius...I would be the lucky one to have a muse who could make me feel so loved and special..I have some secret inspirations James Thanks for caring about me enough to know when I am happy!!! I guess we have the same desires don't we? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Romantic we both want a Love that never dies and just keeps growing more beautiful each day and last forever...James |
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