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Justbleu
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0 posted 2000-09-19 02:38 PM


My Dear one
My everything
Our love in limbo
Held by the heavens
Within delicate white
Souls intertwined
Forever as one
In a blink of an eye
Secret moments held
Somewhere somehow
Hearts captured now
Across that line
Always going no end
Such joy abounds
Dreams never fade
Our pain will not dwell
Angels gather to keep
These childlike hearts
Carried across the winds
Whispering in the touch
Glowing throughout
Familar music so magical
Laying softly on their ears
Needing nothing more
But the gifts God gave
The greatest is LOVE


For JDS


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-09-19 02:56 PM


JB...tender, tender...and lovely...
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-09-19 03:00 PM


Such beautiful and tender sentiments Justbleu! This flowed beautifully, very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sven
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3 posted 2000-09-20 12:33 PM


Warm and full of love and caring JB. . .

Just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-20 04:13 PM


So very sweet and tender.  Lovely writing.
Dee
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5 posted 2000-09-20 04:44 PM


JB - Just Beautiful.
Dee

Denise
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6 posted 2000-09-21 10:12 PM


Very beautifully done, Bridgette!

Denise

Justbleu
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7 posted 2000-10-10 02:03 PM


Thank You to the whole bunch of ya!!!

Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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