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jfilius
Junior Member

since 2000-08-14

Posts 29

0 posted 2000-08-14 04:16 AM

       KELLIES POEM#2
      with love by John

you came into my life,
and made me feel all right.
now i'm crazy in love with you!
you held my hand,
made me understand,
now i'm crazy in love with you!
and with you sweet tasting lips,
you gave me your kiss,
now i'm crazy in love with you!
I know that our lives are different,
and no one may understand,
but if they only could see us together,
the way we are when were hand in hand.
if they could only feel my heart beating,
every time you walk into the room,
it would be easy to see, why it only could be,
that i'm crazy in love with you!
and kellie when i hold you close,
as i am gazing  in your eyes,
I feel the warmth your sending,
like its falling from the skies.
I want the world to know right now,
this love i cant resist,
its easy to see, you were ment for me,
and that i am crazy in love with you!
I would like to tell you all the things,
that i am feeling in my heart,
but i have to keep them bottled up,
I dont know where to start.
one thing you can be sure of,
and this you know is true,
its easy to see when you look at me,
that i'm crazy in love with you!

                      love John

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-08-14 05:56 AM

Well that's not a dear John letter like the usual type.......this one is just roaring with wild passionate love....yes siree .. great work! WELCOME!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-08-14 09:18 AM

Hi and Welcome to Passions,
so very nice to meet you...
wonderful, sweet poem ...
a declaration of your love...
thank you for your kind reply to my work,
I look forward to more of yours as well.
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

BreyerRose
Member

since 2000-08-12

Posts 55
Easton, Pa USA

3 posted 2000-08-14 09:42 AM

First, welcome to Passions. You'll love it here. I'm a 3 day rookie and I think I'm addicted. I love your first post. She's a lucky girl, Kellie. Wish I got letters like that. lol I can't wait to see more.

Hugs and Kisses,
Paula

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2000-08-14 10:31 AM

lovely lovely first write...welcome to our world John

jfilius
Junior Member

since 2000-08-14

Posts 29

5 posted 2000-08-14 11:00 AM

Thanks so much to all of you who commented!
I know that i'm not much of a poet and i dont
compare with the great stuff that i've seen
at this site. I stumbled on it accidently and
since i had a lot on my mind i thought mabey
i would stick my two cents worth in! i'm hooked! please be patient with me this is my first time. looking forward to reading much more of all you masterpieces keep up the great work!
John

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

6 posted 2000-08-14 11:08 AM

Good morning, John. Welcome to Passions...keep writing from your heart ~

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2000-08-14 11:31 AM

Welcome to passions!!!!!!!Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

8 posted 2000-08-14 12:11 PM

welcome, very nice writing

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2000-08-14 12:20 PM

Very nice expression of your love and admiration..James

JnR4eva
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 377
Bronx, NY

10 posted 2000-08-14 01:19 PM

awwwwwwww this is such a sweet poem and a kick butt to enter Passions, kelly is very lucky

and ..the part when you claim you do not know Where to start..stop being silly this is a terrific head start that you have given yourself...once again I welcome you to Passions...this is a wonderful place and I hope you enjoy

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

11 posted 2000-08-14 01:38 PM

jfilius-nice piece from your heart, captures the craziness of love. Welcome to passions!

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