Open Poetry #9 |
Shhhhh.......... |
Sunshine
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A hush succumbs humbly over the passionate, humid ground and a soundless breeze threads through the hills and meadows. The quietness is beautiful and still giving one time to think of the past, present and tomorrow. Memories, movements and dreams fill the heart and mind with many a serene hope. The darkness grows and with it, a silent humbleness. Lulled solitude as one realizes one is alone ~ in this world of darkness ~ ~ the night ~ Yet, one is not alone, as the breeze strengthens and whips the sounds of crickets chirping to your ears. The howling of dogs as they bay at the moon gives one an eerie feeling and the warm Earth finally gives her spirits its sleep, the quietness turns still, the coolness of the dark heavens having fallen d o w n ward. All sleep. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 9 August 2000 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine, This is so beautiful, how do you do it? Thank you so much for sharing this with me. |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Love it, sunshine. It's really amazing how you can stand out in the quiet and, by tuning in with your surroundings, recognize an entire symphony of sounds you weren't even aware existed a moment before. Very nicely written.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, agree with Balladeer, enjoyed the read. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Yes, Balladeer said it best. Very nice read Jenn E |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Sunshine. You painted the picture perfectly. *sigh* |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Your words, your anthropomophizing -and your lines structure all merged together to give me a great sense of peace Beautifully done Sunshine |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea reading your poems what always follow are thoughts like these ...Thank You... stars shining at a distant height way above the clouds so silently motioning signalling existence of l i f e from faraway land the quietude of the event chooses to thrill the ever so dormant thoughts of fleeting shadows yearnings f r o m yesterdays hazy moonlit shadows mark dark looming figured haunting ghosts maybe f r o m a restless past crickets and dogs friends from another life choose to sing songs of eternal love f e l t by separated beings while warmth of Mother Earth's love and care entices troubled minds of her children to r e s t peacefully and dream. ~ my regards ~ sudhir ~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ What an absolutely lovely pen ! So serenely relaxing. And Sudhir added such depth ! What a double-delight this quiet morning. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sunshine this is just devine, very well written. A most enjoyable piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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My friends, thank you for taking the time to read this, and esp. for your lovely comments... Bill, I can only do this because I receive so much from all of you... Balladeer, too true are your words, always... Sy, Jenn, Marilyn, thank you for reading... Mr. Yeats, welcome to Passions, your comments and you are very much appreciated!... Sudhir, what you have done to enhance this piece of coal to create a true diamond...thank you... Marge, your presence always adds that spirit needed to any piece, thank you... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A magnifiscent little poem, speaks so beautifully in its silence. Your talent is overwhelming Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Peaceful whispers your words are....your creations hold such amazing beauty and you seem to grow ever so much in your talent every day with every piece. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Tranquility itself.. HUSG |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunshine, I loved this. You certainly are in tune with the quiet surroundings. The title is perfect. Shhh..i like. |
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Sunshine
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Elizabeth, Mark, Cindy, Alle' you know what pleases me most? Seeing you smile! Thank you all! |
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Sunshine
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Tracie, I missed your reply, so thank you, for coming in! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sunshine you know what is almost as beautiful as your words? those words replied to you...I enjoy all ~~soft smiles Mauren |
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Denise
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Just lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Maureen, Denise, thank you so for coming in to read...I had figured this to be long gone! Such a treat for me to see you both here! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in the silence much can be heard from the sound of heart, to a distant bird we only need to open our ears to that which is held dear and listen to the silence with our hearts. . . Sunshine. . . listening to this poem. . . I can hear your heart. . . simply wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Sven, your words are charismatic, thank you so much for your lovely response... |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So soft and incredibly lovely Sunshine...makes me want to drift off to dream right now..*sigh* Beautiful words my friend. *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Sunshine, I'm a night owl, especially whenever I get the chance to enjoy the darkness outside. You did a fantastic job of capturing the allure and beauty that the night has for me. Thanks for putting it into such beautiful words. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
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Sunshine, this is a sweet read and I concur with my friends above with all the compliments they gave. Coco |
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Sunshine
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Alwye, rascal, coco...thank you all for reading. Always glad to see old friends and new faces... |
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