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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Put your head on my chest while your feeling blue know that now you can rest so I can comfort you Put your hand in my hand while we're sitting here and know I'm always your man just want to feel you near I'll put my arms around you to show you what I need I'll hug you, hold you, squeeze you to bring you close to me I'll kiss away your worries so you can ease your mind I'll do it slow, wont hurry wont ever "not have time" I'll tell you how I Love you so you'll never feel alone and that there's none above you your tenderness has shown I always want you with me no matter what we do I Love who sits before me Love you and only you. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
This is so beautiful...awe.... "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just what every woman wants to hear...thank you...I'll read again, close my eyes and pretend... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I'll kiss away your worries so you can ease your mind I'll do it slow, wont hurry wont ever "not have time" love this TK...besides the rest..very well done and ohhh so sensitive... ~~softly wishing I was younger or you were older... *teazin you... Maureen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful words of devotion ... loves sanctuary...put into verse lucky lady... lovely poetry take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all so very much for your kind replies and words of encouragement. And by the way Janet, there really is no lucky lady at the moment... LOL Just the way I've been feeling a bit lately, missing all these things  You know, when it's not there is always when you think about it most LOLOL So you guys will have to bear with me while I get it out of my system and quit being such a sap. (smiling) LOL. Thank you againStrive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is so beautiful and romantic. I think I will go back for one more read.  |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Eloise ~ Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
awww this is too beautiful...you have captured the very essense of love  this piece is absolutely sweet and beautiful, I enjoyed it very much. "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Words mean nothing without feeling...and you put so much feeling into these words that they glow.....excellent writing...this is a beautiful piece...feel free to "sap" out anytime.. [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely tribute to the one you love. Corinne |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Your special one is so very lucky to have a man with such a sensitive, loving heart. This is just what most women are looking for in a man. You have a special gift and I look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Another great poem by you, A girl could get lost in your words you know! What would be nice is to see these words fly off the net and become a reality, to see and feel them in action! WOW!!! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
JnR4eva ~ Thank you so much, I'm still learning about this every day, but someday... lol Buterflies ~ When I write like this I'm not happy unless I can read it and almost feel what I'm writing about... You are too kind Thank youCorinne ~ Thank you, I'll have to say this is more of a tribute to the one I may Love someday, when I find her LOLsusanbartee ~ Well, again, there really is no special one right now in my life... and unfortunately, it's been my experience that these days these are'nt the qualities most women are looking for in a man. {Sigh}  Thank you.A Romantic Heart ~ You'd better be careful, you could make my head explode you know lol Thank you so much, you're too kind Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh my - so much SAP in here, it's darn near *sticky*!!! j/k This is another wonderfully warm sappy work of yours, so glad I didn't miss it! You are GOOD at this, but let me warn you, now that you've announced your "singleness", I fear for your safety in here! ROFL And I'm not sure where you've been looking for women, but as far as these "qualities" of yours - they are exactly what MOST women WANT! You must be looking in the "one-night-stands" section of the yellow pages boy! ROFL There is someone absolutely wonderful for you out there who will appreciate who you are inside - protecting, loving, romantic, and handsome to boot! Be patient, and I have a feeling a stampede of women are just around the forum corner! I love how you held the character in this...nothing better than a man who gives a strong woman a shoulder to lean on from time to time. That's a truly strong union. **sigh** I'll hush now! More SAP more SAP! |
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