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Open Poetry #9

A nights wonder

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-17 04:50 AM

Those sleepless nights
that come and go
as you close your eyes
and you see the one
who has followed you
through out all of this
and stands in your heart
ready to bring you close.
So you wonder
if the choice you made is right
but one look of a childs face
and how it is so bright,
now in the evenings
alone and seemingly lost
when you think about
how simple to break apart,
remember the one
who stands inside your soul
ready to give you everything
and all of his love.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-08-17 07:23 AM

Beautiful sentiments Michael! I found I could interpret this a few ways, and each was equally heartening ... very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-08-17 07:55 AM

I read a lot of meaning in this one it's very, very well done.

Kathleen

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-17 09:06 AM

So you wonder
if the choice you made is right
but one look of a childs face
and how it is so bright,
now in the evenings
alone and seemingly lost
when you think about
how simple to break apart,
remember the one
who stands inside your soul
ready to give you everything
and all of his love.
=====================
soul mate defined in poetry...
perfect Michael,
perfect, tender and touching.
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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