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Two Lovers In Paradise
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Two Lovers In Paradise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Two Lovers In Paradise If only I could close my eyes and every woman in this great big world would just disappear and go away and as I opened my eyes again to see only one women would be standing in my sight that day in a lovely lush garden of Eden created by my precious God above and this woman would be filled with Love and understanding and she would be you my Love. We would see no cars around for we would have no place to go. No thirty story buildings could be found we would not need them you know. All thru each and every day we could spend hours of bliss taking time to sing and laugh and play in our beautiful garden filled with lovely flowers, trees, lakes and streams all the precious gifts of nature to touch our hearts and fill our dreams. Serenaded by white turtle doves and majestic mountain peaks surrounding us with heartfelt Love. And shining brightly in our sight would be the beauty of a million star filled nights with your lovely lips to kiss goodnight your tender arms to hold me tight. Best of all the part most real the joy a contented heart reveals as two lovers in Paradise share the Love they feel. Jameslee@August13,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very beautiful and delicate piece Jimmy. You're certainly a great writer when the subject is about love...in fact seem like a love expert! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful setting...paradise...two young ardent lovers...the true meaning of love expressed every day...away from the turbulent excesses of this old world...away from the meism that TV encourages...away from the broken families promoted by irresponsible attitudes of selfishness...away from the lies and deceit that permeate the political and business world...away from the destruction of the very planet upon which we live...away from racial hatred and strife..away from wars and violence...and so on and so on....yeah I'm with you man.... "two lovers in paradise" that's supposed to be the way it started out. WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED? this is an excellent piece you have penned, I enjoyed it so much! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nate...you make me feel good with your wonderful comments. ethome thank you very much...I believe what happened was a simple lack of appreciation...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your heart is always on your sleeve, my friend. Once again you have penned your emotions, thoughts and feelings perfectly. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Laughing at ethome!  It's called "population explosion." **sigh** This sure is a beautiful thought sir...oh, if only your dreams could be reality. I'll just call you Adam from now on, ok? Care for an apple? ROFL This was very lovely! "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & mak |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully penned James ... so picturesque and powerfully written straight from the heart, lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hey Jimmy, remember when you posted to me about the Black girl Lost poem...well, I've reposted it and you'll have to look for it because it's like on page 3 of this forum. Nathan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful piece, what a lovely thought...I wish the same to find my lover in such a paradise. Perfectly penned! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marina, Femme, Kit, Nate, and Melissa for the nice comments..may we all find our lovers in Paradise...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WONDERFULLY WRITTEN, James My friend, My regards to you, Sudhir |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful thoughts, James... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
So true James..lack of respect, appreciation,and I agree with ethome...SELFISHNESS..which the world (maybe Americans are so focused on...me and I, money, power, gain,)I thinks it's time we changed that and started a revolution to turn this attitude around...What happened to compassion???empathy for others? SELF!!!!so foolish to be full of self... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir, Claire, and Romantic for the kind and sweet replies. Yes I desire the simplicity of love sans the complexity of this world... James |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Such great dreams displayed here and best of all. They are within your very reach |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
James You big romantic you. Wouldn't it be wonderful to have such a love, so peaceful and free. You are a master at romantic poems. didi |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a lovely thought, and beautiful poem. Thanks for writing it. catalinamoon |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Knight Dreams I fervently hope it is in my reach. ddgoose it would be heaven on earth. Thank you Cat you are so welcome. I went to my friend Tina's baby shower on this Saturday night and I gave her and her husband a copy of this poem and she really enjoyed it...she will be having her baby girl about September 7...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
bttt for my friend...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
For a friend...I get by with a little help from my friends...James |
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