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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Will Tell Mina I Love her more than any other women in my eyes I see. Tell her I feel like I'm home when she's with me and I admire and appreciate every inch of her I see. Tell her that her beauty and her grace have placed a smile upon my face. Tell her I don't feel lonely when she is near and now my hopes and dreams seem perfectly clear. Will someone please tell her the way I feel and let her know the feelings from my heart are real. Oh alright...I will. Jameslee@September18,2000 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, tell her my friend. . . and let her know. . . and you will be happy. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
James This is truly beautiful and if nobody stands up to do this, "I Will". didi |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, You have written with your gentle heart once again. Please tell her, you may just be surprised at what she says. Perhaps she feels the same way. I hope so for you my friend. Wonderful and touching writing.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James, Tell her It is definately worth the chance. Or show her this wonderful poem, it says it all.rp25 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...you KNOW what I think about this...good for you |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
totally sweet poem, thank you for you welcome to this paradise of surrender, kindly, redheart |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
This is a very good poem, And Above all tell her! Us women have a strange way about us, but we do love the compliments even though we tell you to stop. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I thought Mina was just a friend James?? Well regardless of who she is to you, She certainly brings out the best in you. She is making for a wonderful inspiration!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Sven, didi, lonewolf, rose petals, Paula, redheart, rosebud and Marina for the wonderful responses... I have spoken these words to her face to face and over the phone...she has spoken some beautiful words back to me...she said that she feels comfortable when she is with me... Marina a kiss is just a kiss but sometimes it reaches the right lips... James |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was great........I liked the flow.....and the ending made me smile.. Do Tell........... Jenn E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you so much Jenn...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good.. im glad you will ..nice one James.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT A LOT!!!!!! |
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