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Crazy on you
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Crazy on you |
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guiliano New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8new york city |
Crazy on you* my dear sweet girl bliss catch my fevered eyes latch your stare read my puckered lips ache your heated kiss dance your princess toes into my naked river flow arch your golden back over onto my waiting nest I am going crazy on you* girl, no turning round surging forward to your pillowed treasures leaving behind sanity and its measure dip your feet in my pool of mind scratch your claws over my wishes blind free my desire of the you crawling on top of me so fine I am going crazy on you* girl, nothing will ever change my mind. "Takes it easy, baby Take it as it comes Don't move too fast And you want your love to last Oh, you've been movin' much too fast"=(The Doors) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hot stuff here! Whew! yes I read it twice and I am glad I found it to place a comment. Sometimes you have to be patient here at Passions because the place is full of excellent poets and you may get overlooked but not to despair...everyone will look forward to seeing your name in the writer's column in time... |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
guiliano Whew!! I am hot too. Lots of words meaning a whole lot. Waiting to see more. didi |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This makes me want to say!!!!!!!!!!!!! COME ON BABY LIGHT MY FIRE>>>COME ON BABY TAKE ME HIGHER>>>>>YEH< YEH<  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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