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The Soul's Mirror |
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Lovestar New Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 3 |
 Deep within the mists of Avalon, there is an ancient woman, who sings a Siren's song and far beyond the background plays an ancient gong... with resonating sound They say, once upon an olden time there lived in the Emerald Forest A female creature so Divine... sweeter than the sweetest rhyme; that should you ever have the bliss ...to share her sweet & tender kiss ...that ALL the SECRETS of the universe became yours...and nothing less. One night, when walking in the forest deep... a creature out at me did leap! And, as the full golden moon, my path did light... a Fairy Princess came upon my sight ...such beauty before, I'd never beheld... to my knees I was felled Could this lovely Fairy be the Spirit that creates fright...in the hearts of ordinary man? Longingly, lovingly, at HER, I gaze... my Joyful heart...all ABLAZE! I amazed at a woman, who with her smile alone... could tame an entire nation! Was it GOD that made this perfect creation! In the Forest of the Night I travel, NEVERMORE, having fright... having seen for myself - this wondrous being of LIGHT... A GODDESS... a VISION...a sweet FAIRY-ELF! Oh, it's my Angel self in the mirror Shining back at me My own sweet SOUL'S HIGHEST SELF!! [This message has been edited by Lovestar (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was gorgeous! Welcome to Passions! I hope your stay here is a pleasant one *wink* ~Heather PS Check your email for a special note from all of us here.... [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! You've chosen a wonderful poem to post as your first entry. It's beautiful! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting!  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
SHARON! Ya brat...I beat ya to the punch on the card LOL... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I echo my friends above...welcome home. jwesley |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Jillson - Your first poem is a wonderful entree to our forums. Keep posting with us - You'll love it here, and we're all going to love your work...  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Might you see your way the mirror to me lend That I might see in myself one worthy to befriend. Another thoughtful piece. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
First of all WELCOME TO PASSIONS  and what a delight your poem was. WOW what an entrance It was full of wonderful imagery. This is a very good piece..I wish to read more from you "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Lovestar! This is magical! Denise |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
alright, I love the mystic and devine!!! welcome to the club, and cannot wait to see more....... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Welcome indeed, I can't wait to see what you do to follow up this great piece. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
very very enchanting! welcome! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
Great Work! im off to the emmerald forrest. you put such feeling into your writing that it feels like i am realy there. thanks/John |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jillson~ I enjoyed this read a'plenty ! Stories of the little sprites enchant me. Again, I welcome you to Passion's family. Hope you get the opportunity to read and reply to the works of talented others here. We are a wonderful interactive family of friends. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Lovestar! This was a wonderfully enchanting first post ... I'm looking forward to reading more of your mystical musings! Best wishes, /Kit |
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