Open Poetry #9 |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I am mistyfied by what others seem too want to purge on us, by the power invested in their own minds and hearts. I am truely stunned by the force that covers us all in flakes of silence that we, all of us seem to take this in such stride. We are the truth, the Touchstone's of this world, the ones that see in colors of another rainbow that pass through others like x-ray. We sit and ponder at the relivance of pain and love and that they both have the same thing going, for each one tags our hearts. I am amazed, that we can simplify what others cannot and yet lame duck our senses as nothing more than folly. I wonder when the poets shall rise up in word and prose and tell everyone else this is life, this is true love, forget your cynasim and follow us. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
HERE HERE APPLAUSE APPLAUSE...I for one am standing right beside you Michael. [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wonder when the poets shall rise up in word and prose and tell everyone else this is life, this is true love, forget your cynasim and follow us. ======================== ahhh deep pondering Michael... and yes... wouldnt it be wonderful if poetry was the universal language... excellent writing and thoughts later-depth of poetry gator me |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
What a great poem...has a powerful message ![]() Lookin' forward to reading more ![]() "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very powerful piece of writing! Complete with very true words too I feel. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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