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Thinking Too Much!
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Thinking Too Much! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Are you thinking of me? I'm thinking of you..oh, yes it's so true.. I really have tried..to put you aside.. My mind has no shame..it is playing a game.. Wonder if it could be..that you're thinking of me.. I'm thinking of you.... Are you thinking of me..and how love should be? You know time will tell.. if Lady Fate casts her spell.. You will feel it in rhyme..be it yours, be it mine.. My words tell you true..that I'm thinking of you.. Are we thinking too much? Maybe so, maybe not..but it's not wasted thought.. It has perked up my days..put a smile on my face.. Made my heart want to dance.. at the thought of romance.. at the thought of your touch.. Now I'm thinking too much!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL Sunny girl...you sent my thoughts to such a lovely face...now how am I ever to get anything accomplished today with him on my mind? Great write as usual |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Sunny, I just got up...much too early to think. However, I DO think I like this one a lot. Have a great day! Michael |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great write Sunny1. "Now I'm thinking too much". Wow, aren't we all guilty of that! jwesley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
me thinks you think that thinking too much is not thinking enough. You have so many ploys to pull him in that I believe he is doing nothing but thinking of you. I like your presentation of all this and now I am thinking on my own...thanks. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Paula... I 'think' it's Sunday.......... You have my permission to take the day off and go sit by the water somewhere! Thank you, girl, and think peaceful thoughts!! Hi Auguste... Yes, it is early here, too, but not too early to say thank you for stopping in.......say, where do you keep the coffee?? (any vanilla creamer.... ok, Baileys will do nicely!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi jwesley.. Yep.....I 'think' it's just human nature to think too much. All it does is wear out your braincells and give you a headache!! Ha!! (Thank you, too) Hi Mark.. I never try to guess what anyone is really thinking.....I might not want to know!! No ploy, though....what you see is what you get!!! Ha!!! So, thank you, good friend... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, From the heart, as you always do. Words and meanings written into your poems. I'm very glad I stopped by. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill... I'm glad you enjoyed this little love song.....and yes, it came directly from the heart. Thank you for visiting.. Now....where do we keep the coffee? Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I have had these beautiful romantic thoughts also Sunny...what could be more wonderful to spend our time thinking about than Love and romance...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi James...... Yes, I do believe we'd all be happier if we constantly thought of love and happiness. But, for now, that is why we all gather here at the table at Passions.... I'm glad you stopped in!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I enjoyed this much.  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This left a huge smile in it's wake Sunny...thinking to much myself lately  Great writing~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi vandana.... I am glad you liked this one!! Thank you for stoppin in!! Hi Butterflies.... It's ok to think a little, but just not too much!! Glad it made you smile!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, I could have sent this to my long distance man, almost think I should Thinking all the time about someone, it is both a joy and a burden. Love the writing here, and it always feels like you were sitting on my shoulder reading my mind when you wrote it! Peace. Sandra |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sunny1 - I like your presentation - and the the way you moved from him, to you, to both of you. Very nicely constructed. Judging from your picture, how could he not think of you? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi cat.... I think I was sitting on your shoulder as a little elf!! I'm glad you liked this one!! Thank you! Hi LJA.... I appreciate your kind words, and am also glad that you noticed the format. It was fun. And, no....he decided that thinking of anyone but himself was too time-consuming! Thank you for being here.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sunny, I enjoyed this! I'm far too guilty of "thinking too much" ... you've echoed my thoughts in this wonderful piece! I too enjoyed the format, it worked well into your sentiments ... nicely penned Sunny! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Sunny1, Too much to think, too much to say too much to be too much, too much great poem ... regards, sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I can relate to this completely - i think too much too ~S~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Kit.... I thank you so much for reading this, and I agree that we all do a little too much thinking sometimes. Sometimes I'd just like to hit the 'Off' switch to my brain!! Thank you!! Sudhir.... Yes......way too much!!! Thank you, my dear friend for reading today!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
O my Sunny here we go again...."thinking too much" alike!!! ....I was thinking of a poem/song more like...along these lines just today...you read my mind and beat me to it!!! Nice work!! Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Julie.... Listen, if you want to use this poem for lyrics, girl, you go right ahead with my blessing. That would thrill me to no end to have another songwriter use something I wrote!!! That, to me, is the height of success, and I could use a little right now!! Thank you for the compliment!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi Sunny, just got back from a break, where I've been doing some hard thinking. Lovely poem, as usual, keep giving me something to smile for. Your work is always so good, it always cheers me. Take care, and be good to yourself, if anyone deserves it you do.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marsha.... What a nice reply!! I thank you, and I hope I can continue to cheer up your day.....just knowing that I did something nice for you makes my day better!! But remember......if you're going to do heavy thinking......think about good things, because they'll far outweigh the negative!! My best to you, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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