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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2000-08-13 12:23 PM



Sensuous, curved, languorous,
You lie before me, assured
Confident, of my desire
You know your power over me.

As I lie down beside you,
You drop an arm across me,
Waiting for my first kiss
Sure of your power over me.

We kiss long and deep, we begin
Caressing, exchange soft love words
I feel your body tremble
I know my power over you.

Sensations deepen, eyes lock
Souls visible, hearts audible
Gripping each other tightly
We feel the power of our love



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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-08-13 12:31 PM


OOHHHHHHHH yes...feel the power yes I can...very sensuous
Martie
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2 posted 2000-08-13 02:07 AM


Wil--You got pucker power!!  Very sensuous poem...and interesting look at power play.

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-13-2000).]

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3 posted 2000-08-13 11:19 AM


Wilfred~
Very nicely done.
Sensually provacative.

Wanna arm-wrestle ?
~*Marge*~


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Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2000-08-13 03:43 PM


PF -
Sounds like you feel as I do  ~G~ - Thanks

Martie-
'Pucker power'? hmmm wanna play post office? ~G~ (Really - thanks )

MT -
"Arm wrestle"? You'd win every time - I love being pinned ~G~



Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-09-08 04:10 AM


loved this just as much the second time thru
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