Open Poetry #9 |
Power |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sensuous, curved, languorous, You lie before me, assured Confident, of my desire You know your power over me. As I lie down beside you, You drop an arm across me, Waiting for my first kiss Sure of your power over me. We kiss long and deep, we begin Caressing, exchange soft love words I feel your body tremble I know my power over you. Sensations deepen, eyes lock Souls visible, hearts audible Gripping each other tightly We feel the power of our love |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHHHHH yes...feel the power yes I can...very sensuous |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wil--You got pucker power!! Very sensuous poem...and interesting look at power play. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Very nicely done. Sensually provacative. Wanna arm-wrestle ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
PF - Sounds like you feel as I do ~G~ - Thanks Martie- 'Pucker power'? hmmm wanna play post office? ~G~ (Really - thanks ) MT - "Arm wrestle"? You'd win every time - I love being pinned ~G~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
loved this just as much the second time thru |
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