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Tears of Night
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Tears of Night |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
TEARS OF THE NIGHT In nights of slumber A soul does not rest Upon tears etched in pillow A heart does confess Of love once had and now is gone Yearning for answers where she belongs Come early sunrise a smile does shine Hidden behind tears of night. [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Coco.... Are you hiding somewhere in my space?? You just wrote my feelings, and did a great job of it too. (You can come out of my closet now!!!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow Coco,...your words come sad yet soft at the same time. Wonderfully written expression. A sort of window here. Take care now. *Peace. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
You must be peering through everyones windows at night to find inspiration!! HHEEHHEE LOL....I loved it and it really touched me...lovely wiritng!!!  Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Oh Cocibaci, wonderfully written piece, draped in sadness, loved the poem. "Think I'm - I'm lost among the undergrowth So much so I woke up I love you all the same" Manic street preachers You stole the sun from my heart. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...you must have been peeking in my window too...wonderful work here..thanks |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely, enjoyed this one very much.  |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Incredible writing! I really like this poem. Thanks for sharing. Here's one for you. ____________________________ The morning dew dries with tears A heart still but pumps the years Voice speaks in mind of missed Of sweet love once kissed More nights that end with dew But still I smile thinking of you The phone rings with you in mind Now endless tears are left behind ____________________________ |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Coco If my pillow could type, it would write a novel. You captured my thoughts. didi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ Oh ... 'A soul does not rest Upon tears etched in pillow' So tender. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was achingly accurate *sigh* ~Heather |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Short, Sweet, Beautiful |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Damn! How did you know? Great writing, loved it! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful and hauntingly true. Loved it much. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've touched many hearts with this CocoBaci! There are so many similar sentiments within this gem that can be related to. Wonderful verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Yeah. Got me too with this. Really nice work here. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ looks as if you have a crystal ball and can see into all our hearts! Loved this! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I cannot find the words to say how you've made my heart smile today... Though I don't speak much in poetic post verse this one I've shared it bares my soul... Thank you 'ALL' for the warm embrace... Coco |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely! Corinne |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
So many tears of the night.. so many smiles it takes to cover them... this is lovely, my friend...the candor in this piece is striking. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
CocoBaci-You captured the feeling, very well done. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Cocobaci~ This is fantastic writing... marvelous... regards, sudhir |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Words spoken like a true poet...Very well done!!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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