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What if I Dream?
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What if I Dream? |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
I dream a dream this day. I dream this dream then pray. I dream that there's a peace inside us all, I dream this peace will unite us all. I dream a dream this day, I dream this dream then pray, I dream that love will replace all hate, I dream this united state. I dream a dream today, I dream this dream then pray. I dream that all could be free, I dream this unity could be. I dream a dream this day, I dream this dream then pray, I dream that God's will be done, I dream through this we could be one. What if this could be? What if we could all be free? What if we could displace hate? What if? Don't let it be too late! What if I dream?¿? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Richard, I enjoyed your poem and have to say, "well written". |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
Thank-you Bill. I always do my best, I'm only quite new so encouragement always helps. Thanks again. "Drink Life as it Comes. Striaght. No Chaser!" "Trust in the Lord always and he will lift you up!" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
And what a beautiful dream it is...sometimes dreams do come true...let's hope this one does. Great work, I enjoyed your thoughts~ |
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