Lyric of my life (Sven's challenge)

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Open Poetry #9

Lyric of my life (Sven's challenge)

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 2000-07-30 09:01 PM

Lyric of my life

Melody of my heart, song of my soul
My destiny dances in your eyes
As our dream of love lives and breathes
Another one slowly dies

Fated to be lifelong lovers
If not meant to be man and wife
Regardless how the music ends
You are the lyric of my life

If the day should come when we part
One truth will still remain
I’ll hear your song forevermore
Until its dying strain

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-07-30 09:23 PM

Very good Tara...this could easily be converted into a song if there was a chorus.
Great poem!

Toddles
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 396
New Orleans, Louisiana

2 posted 2000-07-30 09:24 PM

Well said and so eloquent!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2000-07-30 10:28 PM

Nice...I especially like " you are the lyric of my life"

never say never

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-07-30 11:29 PM

This is wonderful Tara. . .

Reminds us that the song never ends. . . challenge well met. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

5 posted 2000-07-31 08:43 PM

*curtsying to Sven* Thank you! Glad it has met with your approval.

Toddles, I'm blushing at your reply!

Paula, yes, that's my favorite line as well.

Ethome, hmmm...I happen to be in love with an aspiring songwriter...perhaps he can do something with this. Thanks for the suggestion!

It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley

Richard McDonald
Junior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 29
Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2000-07-31 08:48 PM

You are the lyric of my life means so much. Well done.

"Drink Life as it Comes. Striaght. No Chaser!"

"Trust in the Lord always and he will lift you up!"

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