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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Crimson Pink Chiffon ~*Marge Tindal*~ The evening stripped off her gown of crimson pink chiffon and tossed it gently across the morning of my dawn And there it lays in whispers draping a background of Dresden blue Blended into the morning sky shadings of a lovely hue In crimson pink chiffon Morning sky is dancing Dressed in evening's discard across the sky now prancing ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, This is a feast of colours and hues... Wonderful... "Dressed in evening's discard" WOW regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Sudhir~ I invite you to this Florida morning ! The sky opened up with beauty ... I just had to write it. Thank you for enjoying it and sharing it with me. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
And there it lays in whispers draping a background of Dresden blue beautifully simple ... the best |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I can think of only one improvement..... Carolina Blue.... great poem marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MAMiller~ I appreciate knowing that you enjoyed it.  Prometheus~ Hey ! Whatever whets your palette ! This artist knows Dresden blue when she sees it. LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, this is beautiful, Such a delight to start the day Liz |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Wow....could I picture this scene!!!! A beautiful morning indeed Marge. Bonnie |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My dear Marge-this cowboy thanks you much for the beautiful sunrise. You paint well and as an artist myself I agree--dresden blue is unmistakable. (want a breakfast treat?...stop by Passions in prose forum! wink) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I knew before I ever opened this is was gonna be a cotton candy treat...thanks for the sunrise Marge |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Marge, You allowed me to visual this lofty cloud color, now I have a name for it. Loved this much. (Colors..really are a passion of mine) marcy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Always pleased to share a sunrise with thoughts of you. Bonnie~ It was certainly lovely and lent itself to this writing. So soft it whispered. Thank you for enjoying it with me. MarkB~ Hey there, Cowboy ! Glad to see we wear the same smock ! Thank you for the validation. And then ... there's Delft blue ... same sky ... different hue. LOL ! Paula~ EXACTLY ! Thanks for such a sweet reply. Marcy~ I share with you your passion for colors. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love the imagery this poem brings to mind. You've painted my morning with your words |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge..... This is a lovely way to start my morning. I think I will vow to read one of your poems every morning for breakfast!!!! Thank you for writing this colorful piece!! I have only one goal in life.. It Is: To have more than one goal in Life!! ~ ~ by Sunny ~ ~ |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Simply beautiful Marge..*S* Steve B |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
So soft and delicate and beautiful. You've done it again Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ So pleased to know you enjoyed it. Sunny1~ Delighted to have jump-started your day ! SteveB~ Thank you so much. Eloise~ Thanks always for the sweet reply. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful picture you've painted for my mind's eye this morning Marge! Just perfect! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
If only my dreams contained such a feast of colors...simply gorgeous, Marge. Michael |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, SURPRISE!! What a lovely poem! I've missed your wonderful work! That sunrise must've been amazing! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Delighted to share with you. Thank you ! Auguste~ You are more than welcomed to share the feast of mine ! Thank you !Lil' Lizzie ! ! Now my day is really complete. I've LOVED getting the e-mails and so glad to see your smiling face again !  I LOVE YA' ... bunches ! Lots and lots for you to see and read. I know your time's limited ... so just enjoy as much as you can and stop by once in a while to say HOWDY ! Love and HUGS ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Marge---did you write this for me...you know how I love the colors of the sky...you have made it sooooooo pretty with your beautiful words...thanks! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you so much ! Martie~ I can't think of anything nicer to share with a friend than the beauty of the sky. Well .... perhaps 'Friendship's Bouquet' The next one is done with you in mind for sure ! Love ya' other-Coasty gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh, Simply breath-taking Marge!! I can see the colors all the way from these Appalachian hills! Beautiful Sight! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge, I love those beautiful morning skies...this was lovely, ~~softly Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ I love sharing with you ... thank you. Maureen~ And each one is uniquely different ... such beautiful joy painted each day. Thanks for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, Marge, as usual, I don't get in here often enough, it seems, to keep up with the truly beautiful things coming down. Truly a pretty write...but then, how could one expect less from you. Enjoyed much. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Just so you get to pop-in long enough to leave us a poem .... Thanks for the reply. I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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