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angel of the hills. . . --Challenge #7
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angel of the hills. . . --Challenge #7 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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angel of the hills open your arms to us teach us your secrets protect us from harm heart of the south share with us your love give our hearts life shine your bright light speak to us here who sing your words soft take us to heaven show us your home --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...Sven, I may use this for the Lammas sabbat...lol...would ya mind? simply perfect for the occasion...have a good one...hugs to you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I havent read the challenge but this is beautiful. never say never |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Man I lurvv your poetry  Go Sven Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I tried to look for the challenge Sven, but couldn't find which it might be? From the lovely words you've penned here though ... I'm sure you've not only met the challenge, but exceeded it beautifully! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Excellent as always my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven, this is so wonderfully simple and yet so deeply beautiful. Well done my friend. Juls |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Methink you're speaking of one of the poetesses here at Passions...and if I am right, do I now have to name her? Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, I like this one a lot. Very nice images of the hills enfolding us and protecting us from harm. Challenge well met my friend.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Very beautiful Sven!! Once again you leave me speechless with your poetic voice. For some reason my heart loves to hear words about angels from southern hills. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . serenity, you may indeed use this for Lammas sabbat. . . I would not mind! And you have a good one also. . . thank you!Paula, this is the 7th of my Memeber's Challenges. . . it's in Poetry Challenge if you'd like to see it. . . and thank you! tracie, lol. . .Thank you my friend. . . I luvv your poetry too!!  Kit, see my reply to Paula about the challenge. . . and thank you for your kind words. . . Marina, thank you my friend. . . Juls, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Sunshine, you are indeed correct, and you do not have to name her, as she has already replied. . . thank you!! LW, thank you. . . we do seek shelter often in the hills. . .they speak to us. . . Tennessee Angel, thank you my friend!! I am glad that you liked this poem. . . I tried to capture a setting like you spoke of when you issued this challenge. . . and I'm so glad that I was able to show it to you. Thank you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I had absolutely no idea! I was only teasin'ya! It's really about me! Wow! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I think I may have a new favorite poet. You are the best Sven! |
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Diana Kessler Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 24U.S.A. |
Very nice. This one is highly imaginative. |
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