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Another Day Ending
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Another Day Ending |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Another Day Ending I look towards the setting horizon Another ending to another day The sun gracefully fading Slipping into its ritual slumber The sky, however, begins to slowly awaken Soft pastel fingers reaching outwards Delicately decorating the skies The colors gradually diminishing Giving way to the velvety blackness of night Stars brightly shining, like eyes from heaven Gazing down on us from up above And for a subtle way to brief moment There is a peaceful hush that settles Over this hectic existence we call life |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sunsets are so very pretty! You've described this one so beautiful! And I love the stars too!! Thanks for this beautiful read! Got my vote |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Excellent and descriptive , as usual my friend! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Insect - Thank you. The idea has been rolling around in my mind for days now.. I finally got it down tonight  Toddles - I'm glad you liked it |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are getting so much better with each one. This is particularly soft and gentle and moving with a beautiful flow... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ethome - Thank you I am learning so much from everyone's talent here at PassionsI'm glad it starting show |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
You have the essence of a sunset in wonderful imagery captured. One can almost visualize the hues coming off the page. Well done... Evan |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Evan - Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I can see the colours and the darkness stealing over it...such a lovely image you created never say never |
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Spirit2572 Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 15 |
Wow what amazing detail. If I close my eyes I can see it. I liked it. Spirit7275 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula & Spirit- Thanks for stopping in to read it |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Ah Sunsets.......exquisite...... Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ Such a beauty to greet me as the sun peeks into my day .... kissing your beauty of the night adieu` ! I shall wait for another lovely sunset as they are my favorites by far. Thanks for this little beauty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Simply wonderful RosePetals! A stunningly descriptive poem that left such beautiful images in this mind. Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you all for your nice words I'm so glad you liked it  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Ahhhhh, what a beautiful pitcure you paint. Beautiful read. Jenn E |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
WOW....SO PRETTY!!!!!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jenn and Vandana - I'm glad you liked it Thank you for stopping in |
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