Blended Woman a reply to Doreen's "Reflecting Herself

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Blended Woman a reply to Doreen's "Reflecting Herself

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 2000-08-23 06:29 PM

Blended Woman

She is all
though not enough
and everything
in the middle
of artistry
and life.
She has spectral
intuitions
universal in proportions
and knows before
I ever see it.
This blended woman
of many colors
and attitudes
takes me
beyond thinking
to the edge
of feelings
and back to where
I am being…..
leaving me wanting
though never asking
for more.

Robert

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

1 posted 2000-08-23 06:47 PM

lovely, Robert!

Corinne

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2000-08-23 06:49 PM

One could not ask for more in a woman or in this poem. Excellent! Thanks for sharing. Peace!

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 08-23-2000).]

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

3 posted 2000-08-23 07:50 PM

Thanks Corinne and Andrew....Nice to see you again!

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2000-08-23 08:05 PM

nicely written, Robert... lots of good lines in here... i wrote mine about myself... who'd you write yours about? *g *wink*

seriously, though.... enjoyed this a lot, poet!

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

5 posted 2000-08-23 08:49 PM

Doreen...I never write and tell!!!

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

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