Open Poetry #9 |
The Freeing Of A Spirit |
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Slowly she walked to her garden. Tired legs carried her time worn body. Her steps much smaller now, Her cane close by her side. Awkwardly she bent down. This was no longer an easy task. Years of hard work had taken its toil. She sighed heavily, As a withered shaking hand reached for its goal, A single snow white rose. Clumsily she clipped it, One loose petal fell to the ground... Her tired squinting eyes were twinkling. This rose she would wear today. She sensed a specialness ahead. Her loving heart was full of pride, As she reflected back on many happy years. But for now a small rest was in order. Upon her cane she leaned, As she made it to her room. Just a little nap she thought. And quietly she closed her eyes. But as she drifted off to sleep, Her angel soon appeared. "It is time now", he softly whispered. Her spirit was free now. No longer trapped in its shell. She glowed with elation. Smiling she took one final look around, And they were gone. Her trials were now over, Her race was now run. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A Holy transition indeed.......if only we could be sure of this peace you so gracefuly write about. Regards Jon |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
excellent poetry here enjoyed your thoughts Rex |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Thanks so much Jon. I can only speak for myself when I say, I'm totally convienced. I believe without question Gods word is true and those that know Him shall be carried away on the wings of their angel. Take care, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Rex thank you for your kind words. All the best you, Juls |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Juls, What a sweet, gentle piece this is. Such a tender ending. Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bonnie, there you are with your sweet self again, Thanks girly. Hugs, Juls |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhJules~ How very moving is this beautiful penning~ VERY ... VERY ~ Wishing you the bestest of the best~ Come back and 'play' with us some more ? SURE you will ... right ? *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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