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My first haiku...Big thanks Marge... Leaves Playing
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My first haiku...Big thanks Marge... Leaves Playing |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Crimson leaves falling Twirling softly blue sky play Tickling angel wings Big big hugs and thanks to Marge, my haiku mentor. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ You did an awesome job with the true Haiku formatting, 5-7-5 touching nature's wonder. I really enjoyed the 'falling' - twirling - tickling. Now .... we won't be able to stop you.  It's so refreshing to see poets g r o w ! I'm so tickled for you ! Such enthusiasm is refreshing ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Marge, ya got me cryin. I couldn't have done it without you and all your wisdom. And I love ya so too. Love and biggggggggg hugs, Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WAAAAAAHHOOOOOooooooo...this cowboy is so impressed that I called my horse over to take a read. Way to go girl....your first of many I am sure.......it is just lovely and I like the tickling part best....LOL.......not gonna tell where though...  Beautiful piece my growing poet friend. Congrats |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
ROTF Mark and hey there horsey thanks for reading too. You are too much my friend. And many thank yous as I bow.Hehe... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I love these little gems...so much in so little. Great work...you'll be addicted soon  lucky for you there's a "support group" here at Passions for you  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Butterflies, lol, I'm already sooooo addicted. I just posted another one at the pub. LOL, no stopping me now. Thanks girly. Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Really cool Juls!!! You know that Marge. . . she's just everywhere!!! LOL Good job!! --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
LOL, yeah she is Sven and she's awesome. Thanks for stopping in my friend. Juls |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Juliet, It is my turn to congratulate you on a lovely haiku.... WONDERFUL... yes, great lady, that Marge... regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have'nt tried one of these yet but I see this as being a very delicate and wonderful work of art. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sudhir, thanks so much. You know that means alot to me. Yours was great too. We're flying now, hehe. Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh ethome, ya gotta try it. You'll love it and thanks. Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oopppss....look what fell back to the top!!! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Great line.... "Twirling softly blue sky play"!!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Mark Mark Mark, what am I gonna do with you?...LOL |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww thanks so much Lady. Juls |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Juls, this is one cool haiku. Yes and put me in for the tickling part too..... and I loved the haiku too. parker |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Parker, I'll tickle you any day too, hehe. Great to hear from ya. Toodles and a big wink right back at ya, Juls |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Budding Haikiuists Unite!!! i liked the second line "twirling soft blue sky play" and also the reference to the angel wings... very nice haiku here |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Kaile thank you so much for those kind words, they really mean alot. Juls |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MORE >>> MORE >>> MORE~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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