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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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I've been reading the writing on the wall but trying to see through tears doesn't work at all it's not fair it's not right so Im not reading tonight I can hear the winds of goodbye blowing over my soul and I try to cover up my heart just in time it's not fair it's not right so I'm staying inside tonight I can see that what we had must have been all in my head and all the things you never said it's not fair it's not right so I'm not looking tonight Maybe I'll look tomorrow with my eyes open wide but for now my eyes are closed and you know why it's not fair it's not right I don't wanna see the light but most of all I don't wanna see the darkness of good-bye ..............(sigh) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
this is a definate keeper excellent writing ... it should flow quite well to music  Rex [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
This sure brought back some emotions for me. I had a sigh at the end also. Lovely piece here. Juls |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thank you both and yes I tend to writer in "songwriter" fashion... (you caught me!) Im gonna have to write more "poetic" www.mp3.com/kaylynn Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Kay-lynn, Tears flowing as I read this very touching poem. You describe this emotion extremely well. The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very good words here, red. You are always a pleasure... |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a great poem there! I liked your style. keep writing. I enjoy it."The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
bump |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...yes sigh...I dont want to open my eyes either...great song here |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
nice structure, sincere message... honest verse... i enjoyed this very much oh, and btw, contrary to popular belief denial is not just a river in egypt  ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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