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Her Smile
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Her Smile |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Her smile She told me to relax and wait awhile so I count the days til again I'll see my sweethearts smile. As I hesitate precious thoughts fill my mind. Why must I wait a finer women I will never find. God please open up those precious heavens above and shower me in her sweet Love. Soak me good thru and thru please Lord I'm telling you. Without her smile life is incomplete. With her smile my life is sweet. Yes I will admit I Love her wit and style. Still I hope the day in not too far away when I can linger in her smile. Jameslee@August08,2000 ThingsIadmireaboutLena [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a lucky lady |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh James ... Lena is one lucky lady to have stolen your heart so. Beautiful words of anticipation and longing. Very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Paula and Kit...I appreciate your kind words...as always I am the one that is blessed...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very nice poem you have here Jimmy. You always seem to know the right words to say, when it comes to love. Peace. Nathan |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my, it sounds like a man in love to me....smiling here for you big time |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
so sweet and she's lucky to have that! good luck... salooma |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi jmlee12345, This is telling me that there is a true love. I wish you the best, and another great writing that you have done. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nate, Hoot Owl, Salooma, and Bill for the nice comments... Yes Hoot Owl a man in Love...now all I need is a woman in Love...will Lena be the one...tune in next week for new developments...ha..ha..I can only hope...and pray...and wait...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent poetry, my friend, James... all in love, eh??? good for you... hope that this is one just a small part of a blooming love story regards, sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Sudhir I am falling in Love and I hope she comes in with me...I hope Love blossoms also...we shall see...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lena didn't work out for me...but it was fun trying...I still see her around occasionally. James |
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